the spaces the spaces the spaces

the spaces the spaces the spaces

A Poem by Shirlena

want to ignore impossibilities

rifts that exist to askew

reach up and steal a slice of moon

tasting its covering is smooth and mellow

ascending high

 

say high


say high


LORD to erase the nonsense

pursuing lessons to serve as a crag

soaring well above milky oasis

S O S clearing the spaces


the spaces


the spaces


point out hesitation having a joke on me

owing it a lashing from side to side

as windshield wipers on a hallelujah trip

collect stars float through constellations

mouthing breathless wonder

enveloping the nations underneath


my this


my that


my


clearing senseless ions

uttering notions tempting me I crave...


the spaces


the spaces


the spaces


turn the leaflet over

give credit to the skies

begin agendas new


freedom for my mind


how my body will follow

© 2014 Shirlena


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I agree with Frieda... Your stuff is unique. I tend to write literary so I admire those who were able to come up with fascinatingly ambiguous and mind-challenging poetry such as this. You are talented.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shirlena

10 Years Ago

You know it means you have to be a little off to write like this lol. Thanks Blue.
Blue

10 Years Ago

Haha. I'm afraid I can't agree with you on that. :P
beautiful poem! Your style reminds me of spoken word poetry :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shirlena

10 Years Ago

Thanks Aaron. Don't think I've forgotten about u. I'm coming cause I never forget.
begin agendas anew

I rather enjoyed that line. And although I lack my own complete interpretation to this.
It was a fun write. Thanks for this

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shirlena

10 Years Ago

Actually I'm talking bout nothing so don't be hard on your interpretation...sometimes I just like to.. read more
collect stars float through constellations
mouthing breathless wonder
enveloping the nations underneath

turn the leaflet over
give credit to the skies
begin agendas new

I like how this poem is a kind of everywhere. It flows like a song. Good work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shirlena

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Shaquana for the review.
Always intrigued by the 'spaces'...

as windshield wipers on a hallelujah trip
collect stars float through constellations

Not so senseless after all, the imagery here is off the charts, going on the top shelf. Brava!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shirlena

10 Years Ago

You are so gifted Frieda. I'm honored to be apart of your collection...thank you :)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Awh you're sweet Shirlena, your stuff is unique, always glad to be here :-)
Your style is eclectic and eccentric, and very interesting. I only have one thing I noticed might be amiss - It's is its when it is possessing something rather than it has or is. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shirlena

10 Years Ago

It is an oversight on my part...thanks for calling it to my attention.
Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

No problem. Easy to miss in our own writing.
Shirlena

10 Years Ago

Oh I'm not concerned about stuff like that. I read over my work 100 times after I write it and event.. read more

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