shining down the barrels of hot pursuit

shining down the barrels of hot pursuit

A Poem by Shirlena

indescribably hype about a journey downwards

highway 75 and 12 inches to the bottom

giddy driving single digit…noon in front

golden orb beaming a glorious set of iridescent cheeks

yellow hard shells of machismo prefer gawking at

honking flirtations like city cabs

and my eyes smile at both corners

as Cassville White grows smaller in the rear view

music is Dillatude ready connecting iconic ensemble

Common Sense with a performance of Brandy

Marsha’s ambrosia and though a hidden twist appropriate jazz Snoop Lion

with lights dimmed on a perfect road side collaboration

bedside personality…duality as a couple trained from diaphragm

as the carpet ride past romantic eateries persuasive retail family resorts

beautify sprinkled crumb capped mountains


can’t wait to reach a spot that lulls sky to a lovely rose

turn the blinds slightly sundown


perfect conclusion...conversation

destination

wildly anticipated


company

 

 

© 2014 Shirlena


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After many readings this poem grows on the reader, though there is something about the avante-guard movie like first impression of obscurity, that potentially makes it a most difficult piece to "judge". There will be other times for you and Streamline to showcase your work in the Tournament, though you may want to choose a slightly less convoluted pieces.

Sometimes it's such a dart down the rabbit-hole of subjectivity, that a certainly high % of your readers may be lost even if appreciatively so.

It is juicy and tantalizing though, a sexy piece and highly artistic.

Posted 8 Years Ago


WritersRankings

8 Years Ago

The secret of your style is when you deliver or more properly, WHEN the reader can keep up with you .. read more
Shirlena

8 Years Ago

Thanks, I would too. I'm used to being misunderstood :) It's a gift.
WritersRankings

8 Years Ago

I have the same problem actually with my poetry. Look at the best poets here? They are all in the sa.. read more
So here I am... sitting in the passengers seat... lookin around-- taking in nothing but the perfect sights of life with my besty... taking deep breaths to heighten sensations while smiling sidewards and head bopping downwards to the tunes that start another thought of reflection... yeah, what a journey?

You my dear-- bring in a colour with every bright anticipated splash of your fine artwork of imagery.

Keys turning... engine stops--feels like we just started? but you know I'm here to take another journey anytime... cause your a damned fine driver and the best company a friend could want or need... can't wait to reach a spot that lulls to a lovely rose... yeah, perfect conclusion!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Such imagery here my dahling.Your poetry is such a pleasure to read Shirlena.Always you leave me smiling and asking for more :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shirlena

8 Years Ago

It is my hope that someone walks away from my reading feeling somewhat lifted and enlightened the wa.. read more
"honking flirtations like city cabs
and my eyes smile at both corners
as Cassville White grows smaller in the rear view
music is Dillatude ready connecting iconic ensemble
Common Sense with a performance of Brandy
Marsha’s ambrosia and though a hidden twist appropriate jazz Snoop Lion"

A trip of hot pursuit, an anticipated company, a splendid performance awaiting and honking flirtations. That is where the lovely rose turns into blush and upside down like head over heels. Another marvelous narration...Bravo.....................

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shirlena

8 Years Ago

Thank you I have traveled this highway a lot and it's beautiful. I just wanted to capture it in away.. read more
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:)....................

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