shoot me (weapon)

wishful think, affection

Don’t let me settle

pondering his maniacal tread

going forth

a motion aggressively shedding

Yet

conference with balmy patience

I am laid a glow by his signal

descend from bended knees

a token from me presented

preference devoid the origin

of his sake

his image I acquire

aroma closes in

a scent there is bringing

countenance to slight

there is peril in gazes

primal contents with the

mellowest trances

waiting for his vest to open

perfection in his radical stance

barely composed

from penetration of

muted inquiry

fired from what is unspoken

flame of what is quiet

silent arsenals drawn

refrain being reduced

to heap

he is of sinister possession

trust of reciprocating

desire

I succumb with elation

resistance is complete

defenseless prey

that is yielding

Shoot me

silent arsenals drawn

refrain being reduced

to heap

succumb with ardor conceding

defenseless mark

that is yielding

shoot me



Sitter within your range

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"desire

I succumb with elation

resistance is complete

defenseless prey

that is yielding

Shoot me







silent arsenals drawn

refrain being reduced

to heap"

Shot with guns or cupid arrows ... Love can be strange...:).........................

[Shirlena]

You know once love is confirmed and it's honest I don't think it's strange. Real love to me doesn't hurt, it feels good because you know it's returned. Real love feeds your existence and doesn't feed off of it. :). Thanks for the sweet response Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

Good to know the if's ...You are so welcome...:)...................

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Elated deems the definition of this...as I read the words...
yet the effect you put the reader as if they are the one...
experiencing the moment...the way you take the latter part...
with the execution of the hook: Shoot me...
and then again...to calibrate this verse...