BONUS NUMBER #2 : In Your Thoughts

The stinging nature of heart to keep remembering about people it should not!

In Your Thoughts

 

It’s raining, raining

Oh Baby! It’s raining,

You made it rain, don’t you lie,

You knew I wanted to go out, so why?

 

It’s sunny, sunny

Oh Baby! It’s sunny

You made the sun’s heat scorching

You knew I wanted to do sightseeing.

 

It’s cold winter

Oh baby! It’s just too cold

You made the snow fall

Just when I had gardening call.

 

Yes you are responsible, doubtlessly

Your hate, your jealousy, needlessly

I hope you hate, hate

At least I could be in your thoughts!

Author's Note

I impersonate a relative of mine, who is not with her lover any more. She keeps suspecting him for everything imaginable in this world. The hidden reason being that she expects he is still thinking about her.

I hope I did justice to female emotions and way of expression.

Speak your heart out.

Reviews

[unsavable_soul]

Fantastic,
Simple in wording but grasps through a diverse repetition the many ways he was influencing her, whether it be real or imagined. It also left me to ponder if she were still thinking of him and therefore the seasons bore his absence in her life. Either way great piece.
Chris
100/100

[Shivam Murari]

Thanks a million Chris! :)

[Vani Jalagar]

so awesome..........it was really justifying female emotions.
Yes you are responsible, doubtlessly
Your hate, your jealousy, needlessly
I hope you hate, hate
At least I could be in your thoughts!
these lines are my fabulous :)

[Shivam Murari]

Thank you so much Vani. I'm glad you liked my piece :)

[Frieda P]

Ha when anything goes wrong we blame it on the ex...like how you twisted your pen around that scenario, so true.....

[Shivam Murari]

Indeed! Thanks for reading :)

[Divyanshu Kachhap]

Its So sweet, so sweet
Oh Baby ,
u blew my heart of !!!


and
who is that Bi*ch u r talking about ?

[Shivam Murari]

C'mon! Its a relative of mine!

Thank you, by the way, for the sweetest review :)