The Clockwork Box

I delved into the depths of Atheism recently and looked into all its implications. By doing so, came to one of the most depressing and hollow realizations.

Like a clockwork box, the universe ticks
Creating existence and other such tricks,

Like self-aware substance , with feelings, which cry
For a meaningful maker which logic denies, 

So as time passes on the new will decay
Corrupting all hopes without a delay,

For choice just becomes a material thing
Without any meaning, without any sting.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Deron Alexis]

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