The Clockwork Box

The Clockwork Box

A Poem by Hans Beckman
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I delved into the depths of Atheism recently and looked into all its implications. By doing so, came to one of the most depressing and hollow realizations.

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Like a clockwork box, the universe ticks
Creating existence and other such tricks,

Like self-aware substance , with feelings, which cry
For a meaningful maker which logic denies, 

So as time passes on the new will decay
Corrupting all hopes without a delay,

For choice just becomes a material thing
Without any meaning, without any sting.

© 2013 Hans Beckman


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strong message in a few words like a badass knockout pill or something that's a good method makes a point stick to the reader well done

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