My DAD

Dad. I really love my dad. And don't think that this poem will be enough to describe him. A tribute to my dad.

                                                               MY DAD

He goes early in the morning, 

without seeing my sleepy eyes.

Though, he comes late at night,   

he wants me near him.

When I am sick, is a little weak. 

Never shows his face, 

when due to financial crisis he weep. 

Large and little joys of my childhood,

which I forgot, but he remembered to keep. 

Cares about me and my study,

behaves like he is strict and,  

not my buddy.

Nothing is more precious to my DAD, 

than me.

Walked with hand in hand,

Like tree holds fruit, 

he held my hand when I try to run. 

Time went;

Now sitting in his wheelchair,  and joys and long walks were end,

he watches me and his results.

Every now I wish to God,

'Please send me back when

I and my DADDY slept together 

watching to stars, and moon, and black infinite sky. 

           

                                                                     -Shubham.T

                                                                                

Author's Note

Hi, friends I am starting again after a month. I was busy studying. SO LET ME KNOW ABOUT HOW YOU FEEL ABOUT POEM!

Reviews

[Abhishek Izy]

This is very well depicted and extremely vulnerable heartfelt write. Almost breaks my hearts to know that just like your dad, all our dads grow old one day and is reduced to a man on a chair, lost in his thoughts which are difficult to comprehend. Its almost frightening to think if those thoughts are of being helpless and broke.

This got me a drop of tear or two

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem for your father. People, who touch our life. Break our heart when they become weaker. We must repay them with care and concern. Thank you Shubham for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Chris Shaw]

A touching write from the heart about your Dad. Your lines convey your love for him Shubham.

Chris

[ShubhamT]

Hey Chris thanks for your heart touching reply.

[Mihika_d]

Few grammatical errors present Shubham but won't tell you about those as your feelings and emotions are speaking here, so never mind those. Very beautiful and heart touching poem! Loved it! Loved your bond with your dad!