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My Christmas Wish

My Christmas Wish

A Poem by ☾Panda☽
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Dear Santa...

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Dear Santa....

My Christmas wish:
To stop the wars and fights
And that we accept each other
I wish that these Christmas nights
No one has to bother
I wish that all the little girls and boys
Can play with their funny toys
That everyone with a smile can say:

'Dear Santa... we don't fight today'

© 2013 ☾Panda☽


Author's Note

☾Panda☽
I like to read you thoughts about this poem (:

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Nice Christmas wish if only the world would listen to what you say.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Another sweet one of yours! I like your poems n this one has a great message!Keep it up!

Posted 5 Years Ago


A lovely poem with a lovely message this festive season.

Posted 5 Years Ago


great msg in simple words!
liked it a lot :)


Posted 5 Years Ago


☾Panda☽

5 Years Ago

Thank you ((:
Very cute poem giving a msg. Well done..

Posted 5 Years Ago


☾Panda☽

5 Years Ago

Thank you (:
Penny

5 Years Ago

Ur welcum.
i like this
i like this a lot!
i like its simplicity
it is childlike and poignant
with depth and wondrous sentiment
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


☾Panda☽

5 Years Ago

thanks E. ;)
Yes...a worth while letter, I would say x

Posted 5 Years Ago


☾Panda☽

5 Years Ago

thanks a lot x
I love that you wrote about a wish to end a problem that all sufffer from. I enjoyed this poem very much!

Posted 5 Years Ago


☾Panda☽

5 Years Ago

thanks mate hehe ;)
A wish becomes more meaningful when it's intended not only for oneself but also for others. I like the child-like approach on this poem, i could immediately feel the sincerity of words. nicely penned, panda.

Posted 5 Years Ago


☾Panda☽

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot!
Such a sweet, optimistic poem! I love it, especially those last two lines "That everyone with a smile can say: 'Dear Santa... We don't fight today'" Just so lovely! :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


☾Panda☽

5 Years Ago

Thanks a bunch

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Added on December 14, 2013
Last Updated on December 17, 2013
Tags: Christmas, Peace, Hope