Sun Flower

Sun Flower

A Poem by ☾Panda☽
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This poem is about happiness. Don't forget to smile, happiness is a strength, that we all need in dark times.

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Waking up in the early morning
With a giant smile upon my face
This time it feels good and finally
I have found a song that I can sing
A beautiful melody in my ears
This day I can feel it, oh yes
Not anymore surrounded by fears
But I can only feel the happiness 
No worries and darkness for today
Cause I can feel a lot of power
When I walk down the highway
I can find a beautiful golden flower
With his leaves oh so pure
They are dancing 
On the rhythm of my beautiful song
And I'm singing like nothing is wrong

© 2013 ☾Panda☽


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☾Panda☽
Any review is welcome.

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This flower of the garden type poetry make my heart shine like the sunflower in the sunshine before the rains This poem had energy it has power. I love poems about God's natural flowers.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lovely...energetic and felt...made me smile :) x

Posted 5 Years Ago


I THINK THE LAST TWO LINES WRAP IT ALL UP ... oops :} caps lock mistake :)) i have a couple offers .. if i may?? (When I walk down this highway) and (I find the golden flower) ... your poem reminds me of a piece of highway between me and Sturgis SD that erupts in sunflowers on both sides... truly you achieve your expression of happiness .. and i absolutely agree these are dark times... there is a powerful hook in your first verse thinks i...
write on
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Waking up in the early morning
With a giant smile upon my face
This time it feels good and finally
I have found a song that I can sing
every day is a new day dear friend.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Waking up in the early morning
With a giant smile upon my face
This time it feels good and finally
I have found a song that I can sing
every day is a new day dear friend.

Posted 5 Years Ago


i feel great light of happynes and hope. it s realy make me happy this piece of your creativity . i wish everybody have morning like this. thank you

Posted 5 Years Ago


The vivid color of the sunflower, to me, is the best symbol of happiness. The title is very fitting to the idea conveyed in this piece. very well-penned.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Your poem radiates happiness. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Very positive poem & has an interesting rhyming scheme. The picture it presents is beatifyul. Well done.

Posted 5 Years Ago


That was beautiful. It made me feel happy just reading the first line. Thank you for this beautiful poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on December 17, 2013
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