Chapter two:Lion fallen in love with the lamb

Chapter two:Lion fallen in love with the lamb

A Chapter by ThoughtsofShyann
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Francis and Roslyn spend more time together and he slowly faces reality.

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I look up at the clock and its 1:20 I sigh in disbelief so many more hours of pure torture I just wanted to talk to Roslyn. I couldn't stop thinking about her the sight of her looking down at her feet blushing the first time we had made contact made me smile. While looking out my window I realized someone had been leaning over me the scent was all to revealing it wreaked of fish and other sea creature. It was my dad for all intents and purposes, he said in a very concerned voice "Do you need to talk?"  "No I am fine just thinking is all." He gave me a look and I knew I was not getting out of this conversation so I made room for him on the couch. "So tell me about this girl?" I tried extremely hard not to blush but it just happened "Her name is Roslyn and she was just showing me to all my classes given we had the exact same classes, she was  just being friendly is all." I could tell he wasn't buying the whole being friendly pitch. "Do you like her?" "She was just showing me my classes its not as if I courted her." I managed to convince him with that because we changed the subject  to work and landed on our past life. "I had never knew what I had wanted out of life all I can really remember is the music and the horses. I remember my mother telling me to go brush lily or horse and I would sneak her for a ride, man how I loved her smell." "I bet you did." We both laughed. "Want to go for a morning hunt just you and me see how many bear we chug down?" He smiled and ran stopping at the door waiting for my response. "As intriguing as that sounds I think I will stay in." I could see he was a bit sad at his denied request but he understood. I decided to listen to music for the rest of the morning till it was time for school. I noticed after awhile that it had begun to rain and it was almost time for school. So I begun to get ready I took a shower, while getting my clothes ready I could smell mothers smoothies, Allison mad them just right. "Save me some" I yelled down the hall. I put on my grey long sleeve jeans and a jacket. I ran down stairs and drank what was left of the smoothie "Thanks bye" I ran to the car. I wondered what was taking Ariel so long I noticed my foot began to tap in irritation. 'Hurry up I thought to my self' she hopped in the car and hugged me. My body clenched what was that for "What I can't hug my brother?" She giggled, but I had wondered what was up with her. I drove as peacefully as I could but I am not a calm driver when we arrived nearly flew out the car when Ariel stopped me. "Be careful okay." And she left I didn't really listen to her I just pretended to once I was in the school I remember English I got there early to avoid stares. When I got to the class Ms. Heine was there and so was Roslyn. I felt my hunting instincts trying to come out but I manged to control them. "Oh hello Mr.Francis you work was excellent I feel you will have no problem in this class." "Thank you." I walked to my seat and when I looked up Roslyn was walking toward me. A million things ran through my head; 'wave don't wave, say hi, be nice, oh she looks beautiful.' And that thought hit me she did look beautiful her hair was up in a really messy bun and she was wearing brown boots with black jeans and a knitted brown sweater. She looked really nice, she sat right next to me and I could feel her start to get nervous. "Hey sorry about yesterday I just had to get going my mom text-ed me and told me to get out side right away." "Its fine really I had to go to." I didn't know what to say but I knew it would be rude not to compliment her, "You look really pretty today." Her cheeks turned hot pink and she smiled "Thanks, do you want to eat with me at lunch?" "It would be my pleasure." She smiled "You don't mind me sitting here do you?" "No, but I don't know if the person sitting there will agree." She looked at me and laughed "We don't have assigned seating." "oh, cool" Man I felt stupid. Class had began and I was getting done with the work quite fast not considering the fact I've learnt this over ten times. Roslyn and I where passing notes to each other. I learned so much about her and man was I loving this. The bell rang and everyone exited the room as if it was on fire. I was walking with Roslyn when I heard this loud alarm. "What's that noise?" I said while covering my ears pretending as if it hurt because everyone else was. "OH That's just the fire alarm we have to go out side." Every one walked out to the front of the school we stood there for about an hour. I enjoyed this time because I spent it with Roslyn she talked to me about her family and all it had felt as if I had known her my whole life. When we got back inside the principle announced that all student are to go home early while they figured out what triggered the alarm. I walked Roslyn to her car it was a classic buggy light pink. "Looks like we have to postpone or evening for another time huh." I smiled. She looked at me and  stared "I love the way you speak." I didn't even realize I was talking like an old man but the thought did make me laugh."Why.. I mean thanks. Well I will see you tomorrow." I went to my car and got in, "How was your day Ariel asked?" "It was great I spent the whole day talking to Roslyn did you know her dads in construction her mom use to be a dance and she dreams of being just like her mom." I kept rambling on and on about her I didn't realize how much until the car stopped and we where at home. I froze and stop talking had I really been talking about her this whole ride I felt embarrassed and from the look on my sisters face I knew what she was about to do. She ran toward the house I grabbed her by the wrist and threw over the house to the back yard and I flew back there restraining her from going in the house. "Francis! Let me go I am telling them whether you like it or not she kicked my head cracking my skull ever so lightly. As my skull healed she managed to make it in to the house in to the living. I could hear her "Mom, dad Francis is in love with a hu.." She didn't speak I feared the worst I ran into the house only to see a big plate of meat it was lion its been so long and it looked so good me and my sister raced to see could eat more we both lost to dad. We all sat on the living room couch laughing and then Ariel yelled "Francis is in love with a human." The look I gave her she knew things would never be good between us again."Francis!" Allison said surprisingly in a happy mood. I smacked my lips "I am going to my room bye" I ran to my room and looked the door I stayed there until Friday but only because I had missed seeing Roslyn. I had been away from her far to long. I cam down stair Allison looked at me and gave a shy smile while handing me a shake I was starving. "Thank you mom sorry about how I have been acting." "Oh honey" she says with a relieved sigh "Its okay, you don't have to be sorry for anything, by the way we got Ariel a car so you guys can ride separate." I smiled and got in the car happily driving off to school. When I arrived at school I seen that Roslyn was early again, as soon I parked I rushed to English. The teacher wasn't there but Roslyn was she hadn't looked up and she looked really sad. "Roslyn?" She looked up and her face lit up her cheeks turned hot pink and she walked toward me with speed and hugged me. I felt shocks go threw my body and I felt the need to drink as her heart bumped against my chest. But I couldn't let her go she looked up at me her beautiful brown eyes just seeing right threw me. I lend forward and I heard a door open me and Roslyn both jumped. Ms. Heine let out a chuckle "Sorry" we both walked to the seats in the back. The day continued  out normal and it felt great to just spend time with this mortal it made me feel mortal I mean I felt alive. It was after school and I had walked her to her car. "So, you know almost everything about me and I know absolutely nothing about you." "Well you don't ask me any questions." And I really hope she wouldn't start. "Well maybe I could come over." A hand touched my shoulder it was Ariel "So what are you guys talking about?" "Nothing Ariel.. leave" She was embarrassing me. "Oh hmm I was just asking Francis if it would be okay if I come over." My face sunk as I realized the danger i could have put my family in the danger I almost put her in." I stood there shocked. "Roslyn we are still unpacking everything is everywhere I am sure later on in the future though rain-check?" Although I wasn't pleased with her tone Ariel did have a good excuse. So I tried to play along I was good at convincing "Oh yeah how could I forget the living room is field with boxes  I couldn't bring you home to that. Can you wait till we have completely unpacked?" She looked  pleased "Of course.. sure well I will see you guys later." As I walked away to my car Ariel passed me "Your welcome"She whispered under her breathe. Although I wanted to be mad at her I had to be honest she just saved me from making a huge mistake. Once I got in my car everything hit me at once I couldn't be with her, our love could never go far I had to push her away.


© 2013 ThoughtsofShyann


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OK re-reveiwing lol.. this is going good still feeling its a it rushed. U really need to go back and put indentions and stuff in this. When grammar is good people are more likely to wanna read it. Its a good chapter just needs some work:-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I Have to say a couple things, first, I think you are progressing the plot to quickly(Chapter 2 and we jumped from puppy love to hug, within a couple sentence?). Second of all, your many Grammar and formatting issues. But "The Gray Wolf"(the other guy who reviewed this) sums it up perfectly. However, so I wont be so negative I'll say I enjoyed to dialogue ( because I Really did!).

Posted 10 Years Ago


Once again, it's all one paragraph. When there is a change in events or a different person is speaking, then you create a new paragraph. Lol. I'm really getting the twilight vibe here, but I trust that it won't be because you said it won't. Also, it's moving really fast, the only really clear descriptions are of Roslyn, so maybe you could work on that? There's still sentences that are just being put together when they shouldn't be, and a few grammar errors. I hope this review helps a little bit. :3

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ok friendly advice:) You need indentions really bad and some grammar mistakes. Might want to put some room between sentence's. Again just some friendly advice:) Love the chapter though:)!

Posted 10 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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I just always loved writing so I decided to just write about my dreams and thoughts! My name is Shyann as you can tell. I enjoy fiction mystery and Romance. I will try to do as many books as my mind w.. more..

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