The Soliloquy

I'm still waiting for him...

 

The Soliloquy

 

I shall not dream tonight as hope intends,

but merely dwell under star’s that shine,

Oh ‘neath the quilted sky that bends,

I think of him who once was mine.

Oh crying moon in all your pain,

My ancient friend of times gone by,

You know of loss, you know of gain

You know the tears that I cry.

The hunter croon’s within the trees,

His figure standing proud and tall,

His aching lingers on the breeze,

For the mate he lost last fall.

The boy with eyes so sharp and green,

Shall forever stay within my heart,

Because of him I cannot dream,

Because we have been torn apart.

The silver lights that twinkle bright,

know why I sit and wait for him,

my intricate tears of the night,

see my faith is turning thin.

I wait in rest and pray in vain,

For he who once was in my claim,

And the heavens watch me from above

wait for the boy I know I love.

Author's Note

It stills need a bit of work so if you have any advice for me please, don't hesitate to tell me.

Reviews

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

This is extraordianary a wonderful piece of writing which flows majestically,your talent is obvious and the depth of your verses and words are most profound, i feel the pain in your voice for your loss and that maybe it was written from the heart not from the mind in terms of a real existence of one kind for you.
Kudos to you my friend i am in awe of your writing 10/10.

[deeps]

Such an undying emotion you have penned here form your heart.
I like this the way it is, I wouldn't chnage it. Flows wonderful
And the feeling is there.