The Calling

Each night

I pray to see you dear

within your crown of wonder

I dawn my gown

and wait for thee

amongst the leaves

and thunder.

 

The mighty gail

kicks up the sail

of my pleats

within the wind

and anything

can come to pass

if only you could hear my song

of longing and desire.

 

A siren 'No'

for I will let no harm

fall upon you

but keep you safe

in my embrace

each evening and each morn.

 

And my sweet babe

whether with me now

or out amongst the flowers

shall learn our ways

and Love the Earth

for all she's worth

the Moon with her deep caress

and the Sun's great warmth and power.

 

A family

all are we

working closely together

let no harm come

thy will be done

amongst the Ones

that carry the Light

forever.

 

Our sight is might

beyond the range

of those that walk among us

but sees deeper still

unto thy will

of One and all

we hear your call

O Lord and Goddess

we do your bidding.

 

We hope and pray

everyday

that nature remains Supreme

and in our dreams

you lead the way

with pure Love lasting everafter.

 

 

Reviews

[Baby Boy]

Wow! This is so so beautiful sweetie! It has such a calmness and warming feeling about it, and the beauty shines through your words! I love this write gurl! Your words are magic! :) One luv Miss Siddartha!


-JC-

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

excelent darlink.....love this so quiet though speaks volumes!!

[Miss Prince]

This sounds like a mix between a love poem to a lover and a love poem to a God. This is a very interesting take on love and reverence. Very lovely, well-written.

[Taj Sonchai]

Wow Sidd, This is great! What I'm getting from this is that we are all connected, be it on an elemental or humanistic level we are all one. All of this should be protected and cherished. This is my interpretation anyway.

Thank you for writing and sharing.
~Taj

[SM Davis]

This is another perfect classic.

The mighty gail
kicks up the sail
of my pleats
within the wind
and anything
can come to pass
if only you could hear my song
of longing and desire.

Perfection prime! I hear the longing...and the hesitation...a love from a distance...wonderful write!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Worded and penned quite wonderfully."our sight is might beyond the range of those that walk among us" just great writing.

[Jason]

Lovely. The hope of love. Simply perfect.

[robin]

Though men's minds seem to fill with vinegar and scorn,
my blindness is lifted gently enough to cure a broken heart
in these word's borne of the Mother
and sung by a sister
who renders me songs of splendor and more
calling me to these woods at night
to ponder gails
and sailing pleats
I arrive!

You have really got something otherwordly here, Bravo!

[~crazy Beautiful~]

love, nature and the way you word such masterpieces
brilliant
thank you for entering my contest

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Woh! Im like totally blown away by this cool piece. You give it such depth and power. I can really see each scene move to the next, and to the next gracefully. This is so beautiful. Really nice!

Mikey

[poddar kushal]

this may be earthy but not without the essencial emtional intelligence that makes a poem stand. you reminds me of S.Plath.