Our Story

There was a girl and a boy

who lived very far from one another

their essences traveled from one side of the world

to the other in waves of elation, delight-

waves faster than the speed of sound,

they traveled though ethereal space and time

into one another's embrace

rising to one another as the Phoenix

as their astral bodies melded into a unity

that physical bodies could not equal-

it was a melding of sweet revelation

where no words needed to be spoken

as a million things were said without speaking a word.

 

They felt transcending, pure, unequivocal, absolute happiness

as they never knew before,

so great, so pure was their happiness

that they were dreadfully scared of spoiling it

in any way, lest it would burst

like a bubble, so they knew not whether they

would ever meet in real life yet they held hope

that one day they might gaze into one another's eyes,

see a vision of each other's souls.

 

They looked forward with barely controlled excitement

to gazing deeply into, tasting one another

perceiving a vision of paradise and escstasy there

which in turn would bring them closer to divinity

a sweet paradise on earth-

they couldn't keep their hands from one another

would kiss, lick, gaze deeply into one another's eyes

all day and night long

as their minds' eyes met as One

they spun into the Universe in electric azure blue

while their simultaneous orgasm lasted for eternity,

filling the entire cosmos with its energy,

its bliss creating supernovas, shooting stars

within space and time while

his ejaculata became the nebulae

her seed became the stars.

 

Together these birthed a new galaxy

amidst the cosmos as their cries of ecstasy

reverberated through the space time continuum

forever and ever joining the infinite

wisdom of the planets and galaxies beyond

as their Love became the Universe

the Universe became Them,

their love gave birth to the Universe

the Universe gave birth to Them

and in the Beginning was the End

in the End was the Beginning.

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

Sidartha.. this speaks to every readers soul.. of gods and goddesses divine in their own making-
creation being the catalyst for what affection abounds in stars.. the nebuala skies of eternity
i enjoyed the way your passion sends chills through the body..percieving celestial heights.. with ambition
describing the cosmic throes of ecstacy in painted prose.. revealing what becomes of "stardust"

ethereal romance.. your metaphysical projections wisp auras with magical winds.. the way distances
come together when two souls look at the moon simultaniously.. describing desire unbound..
traveling- reaching- enlightening space and time..to what becomes of revelations.. loved this

[chr66is]

Beautiful, idealistic, and optimistic. It's nice to see that people believe in love. Good write!
Peace,
Chris

[xlynne]

what a sweet, extremely romantic, a little sexy, enchanting, and beautiful story. i loved everything about it. i thought it was such a sweet tale of romance, two people so deeply in love and they come together to create the universe. you kept the romance well throughout, never skipping a beat as you described the universe as well. your piece is artistic and wonderful. congratulations on such a great write!

[Bill Grimes Jr.]

What a romantic tale of deepest love.....regal and flowing.......the real stuff we all crave.....but often never experience......I feel a deep piece of your soul in this beautiful poem my friend. Thank you for sharing......

Peace,

Bill :-)

[The Tao of Bri]

What an incredible write! Very romantic...sometimes there are connections like that that are so powerful, that people do not want to spoil with the tests of day to day living..it may make them stronger or it may make them destroyed...so they delight in the creation of the universe... NICE! True Love does create new galaxies indeed!

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Sidd-

Very beautiful. One nice thing about being separated by a whole world is that it makes coming together all the more intoxicating. I especially like the picture that you chose for this piece. Great work!

Peace and love,
Gabe

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Real sweet. Long distant love, full of longing and once that meeting the climax builds into an explosion of pure satisfation. Very good Write. Your art is just as great, Loved.

[Celtic Cat]

Wow, how utterly moving and intense!!! I have heard of this melding going on but have no experience of it first hand. What a magical mystical read this was....so vibrant, so full of life, full of passion, obviously full of everything as the universe bows down to the embrace. Absolutely stunning write, my friend!! Thank you so much for sharing this!!!

[SM Davis]

this is beautiful and wise....and dreamy and hopeful. If only all love could be this way. Seeing is not always believing and sometimes we believe in something we've never seen....and hold it dear. Wonderful!!!

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This is a great write and wonderful imagry and skill.
Debby

[J. James Reider]

this is hard to review (:

I loved it, because it made me think... The implications of what this could mean are vast and it is just as fun to ponder them as it is to read. "in the beginning was the end and the end was the beginning" is such a great line to get my grey matter firing.

This poem is outstanding!