I adore you, always...

I adore you, always...

A Poem by Siddartha Beth Pierce

Today
you smelled salty sweet
enough to bring me to my knees
it divinely reminded me of
the weekend we spent
at the beach
this weekend past.
 
Today
you tasted salty dear
whispering quietly in my ear
sweet nothings
yet delighted I was
to feel you near and
taste your touch.
 
Today
I heard your salty swarm
beneath my loving arms
I felt you bend to my will
delighted in the thrill
of our coming together as One
you make me feel
Zen complete.
 
Today
you made me feel salty warm
so fine
completely, wholely Sublime
as You to me
became
One again
its never the same
it's never the same, my love without you.
 
I adore you, always...

 

© 2009 Siddartha Beth Pierce


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OH how beautiful, being in love like this is the best feeling in the world, "Zen complete" pretty much says it all and your use of salty senses is just gorgeous. I wish everyone could feel this intensity that is overwhelming *sigh* such bliss...such togetherness...such magical power in these words.
Loved it xxx

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I like it, evoked lovely images in my mind.

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OMG, you touched a very deep poin in me right now , I adore that writing, its so romantic and deep, thats the kind of potery unlimited I am looking for ... beautiful Yossi

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Nice use of "salty." Very cool statement of your love by using the senses!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Scents have the power to drive
one wild. The salty air of a beach
would be divine, I think.
Roar! haha Nice write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Sid, this was really beatiful (and hot too!). Great job with this piece, I loved it.

Antonio

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I adore this piece. You have described beautifully this romantic feeling. This is what we all would love to have. A great piece of writing...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful poem. Description and story was sweet and kind. When we allow someone into our life. Need and want them. Can rebirth a dead spirit. Love and emotion in your words.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


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uhh!!! very innocent yet so passionate!! loved it!! completely!!

:) love,
Krishna

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This is so wonderful and oh full of love,
Amazing beuatiful write you have penned!


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OH how beautiful, being in love like this is the best feeling in the world, "Zen complete" pretty much says it all and your use of salty senses is just gorgeous. I wish everyone could feel this intensity that is overwhelming *sigh* such bliss...such togetherness...such magical power in these words.
Loved it xxx

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Siddartha Beth Pierce

Richmond, VA



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