Brilliant Soul

Brilliant Soul

A Poem by Siddartha Beth Pierce
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In honor of Valentine's Day - for that special someone...

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Sometimes

late at night

when the moon

doth glow

I wonder how

it could be so

that your brilliant

Soul and

shinging Heart

have become so

enmeshed

a part

of me too.

 

For this

I am

truly

thankful

my dear

you are my

one and only

One

that sets the

moon

and raises

the sun.

 

© 2011 Siddartha Beth Pierce


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Fine write that reminds me of poems inspired while I was gazing up at the Moon that I've penned past, of those I love and always shall.

Posted 7 Years Ago


SINCERE AND HEARTFELT
respectful and warmth to melt
For the formidable keeper of the sun and the moon.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A very beautiful poem, the love and devotion are obvious here.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I hear this old english accent and choice of words so fitting. Smooth transitions.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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A darling expression of love. Those last lines are so sweet.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love the last bits :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice work, great metaphor at the end.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Wonderful write and imagery..love does not come along very often..and know it is from God makes it awesome..Kathie

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a beautiful confession of love and devotion... that perfect blending of two into one... How I long to find that fulfilment across space and time.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful! Your poetry flows so well, directly from the heart. This poem expresses so much more eligance and meaning with so few words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Siddartha Beth Pierce
Siddartha Beth Pierce

Richmond, VA



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