Duo of Kindness

Today

you shared your son

with me

we laughed

we played

beneath the trees...

 

The stars they did

glow at night

beneath the beautiful

moonlight...

 

While you two slept

from day's tire

I awoke

to stoke the fire...

 

To keep us three warm

throughout the night

until the dawn breaks

and we begin

our beautiful toil again...

 

That of smile and grin

that of much shenanigans

as is true

with child and Father

that which is true with

a friend together...

 

May our day be bright

as was our night

may our play be as

forthright

as the two of you are to me

my duo

of kindness

times trinity.

 

 

Reviews

[bobby]

A blissful keep of words played gentily against the heart. You are a sweet soul. I do enjoy your work...more I say keep me close...

[Quinn Blackburn]

sweet wordcrafting, wonderful flow and nurturing feel :o) wishing you laughter

[Moflo]

Definitely a very tranquil piece, I love the happy tone to it and your pacing is pretty solid. I love your last stanza a lot, you made the rhyme work greatly to your advantage. Very nice write.

[Aidz]

This had a peaceful and tranquil quality to it... thank you for sharing

[Ladysue]

This was so endearing and beautiful. A wonderful things to watch and be part of...truly a joy to read...

[Tommy]

What a tribute to father and son, seems to me to be trio of love...Nice tender write. The flow is great the rhyme is true, just a great read!

Bravo!
RLG,
Tommy

[Siddhartha]

comes like a breath of fresh air...happiness and fulfillment...peace...

[Jesse N. Wall]

Classic use of shenanigans. Your poem rocks.

[Derek S.Keck]

I love the personal sacredness that this conjures and how you allude it to a personal trinity to emphasize that deeper meaning and sanctity. Lovely poem!

[OT]

what a charming poem! so endearing and sweet - the descriptions and words are delicate to compliment the piece - and a nice rhyme rippling through it - just here and there to carry it along to a tune!! nice!!