unforgetable

unforgetable

A Poem by Joshua Smit

your words fly past me like bullets,

your lies burn holes through my heart,

each breath i take you steal, each thought,

caught in your grasps

 

i am better now without you!

not better than without you!

but i cannot forget you,

your fiery lies are still in my mind,

and your burning actions still in my soul

 

but still i cant forget you,

i cannot forget the way you held my hand,

even though i see now that you were only holding me back

i cant forget your beautiful words,

even though they were burning lies,

and each word burnt away a piece of my soul

© 2010 Joshua Smit


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Hello friend,

You write well and I wish the ezine of which I'm part of (Golden Apple Ezine) could publish one or two of your best works.

Do submit something to us if you wish to be published.

Visit the site: http://goldenappleezine.blogspot.com/

Posted 13 Years Ago


You have some serious talent :)
I loved it ♥

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well written. Really nice.

A suggestion..Use capital letters in the appropriate places, will look better.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Joshua Smit
Joshua Smit

Johannesburg, gauteng, South Africa



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