blue light dance

blue light dance

A Poem by Joshua Smit

sudden darkness fills the sky,
loud cracks of thunder
echo across the land.

Blue lines streak from above and
wreak havoc down bellow.
Bullets of ice are shot from heaven's rifles
and torrents of rain clear everything of old.

as quickly as it came, it disappears,
light shines through the freshly parted clouds.
The world seems different, refreshed... renewed
destruction gave way to new creation,
and new growth was inspired

© 2011 Joshua Smit

Author's Note

Joshua Smit
not sure what to think bout this one...

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i liked it you did a good job

Posted 9 Years Ago

It's a thought, and impression and a pretty clear one at that. Writing is expression of the events and perspectives we are aware of around us. I'd say this was a hopeful and positive expression.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on March 20, 2011
Last Updated on March 20, 2011


Joshua Smit
Joshua Smit

Johannesburg, gauteng, South Africa

i dont like talking bout myself :/ more..


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