In Reality

In Reality

A Poem by Alicia™
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But this happened in my dreams; not reality

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You made me smile,

And you held my hand,
Whispering to me
Your hopes and desires.
 
You called my name,
And made me feel special;
Loved.
 
But this happened in my dreams;
Not reality.
 
In the real world,
We’ve never said more than
Two words to each other.
 
A nod, a smile,
And nothing more.
 
But I don’t even care;
You mean nothing to me in reality.
Just another person,
Just another name
In the shadows of my memory.

© 2009 Alicia™


Author's Note

Alicia™
I've been writing a lot of poems these past few days, and I hope you like this one.

I know poems aren't meant to have sequels, but click below to go to the sequel of this one.
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Life and dreams can flow so beautifully together.. this one shows that you almost possibly got caught in the image of a dream of another? Maybe some things that you admired about them .. which is usually temporary when it's a visual image with just everyday gestures. Great that you realize that it was just a fantasy.. as love or sometimes even great friendship is not always in order with our fantasies and hopes. I found this very down to earth.. humbling and well sooo many people we will cross that will only be just a face in memory that slowly fades.. special ones will make it a little deeper! Bravo!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Written so beautiful this poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


Life and dreams can flow so beautifully together.. this one shows that you almost possibly got caught in the image of a dream of another? Maybe some things that you admired about them .. which is usually temporary when it's a visual image with just everyday gestures. Great that you realize that it was just a fantasy.. as love or sometimes even great friendship is not always in order with our fantasies and hopes. I found this very down to earth.. humbling and well sooo many people we will cross that will only be just a face in memory that slowly fades.. special ones will make it a little deeper! Bravo!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this, it speaks many words and the emotions are felt completely. They jump off the page and waft through the atmosphere in the room and change the mood. Amazing job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was soo beautiful and romantic! I love this poem

Posted 10 Years Ago



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