You And I Both Know

You And I Both Know

A Story by Alicia™
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You were destined for greater things than being with me.

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To my dearest love,
 
I know you hate me for what I did to you – for leaving you. But don’t you see?! I did it for you! You were destined for greater things than being with me. And now you’re who you are, don’t you see why I did it? You’ve got your own family now; your own life.
 
And me, I’m still where I was, over a decade ago. Just a small town girl, who will always have her destiny laid out for her.
 
I’m sorry I left you, and I’m even more sorry that it had to be that way, but you and I both know that I did it for you.
 
A week ago, I saw you. You were with your family, sending your little girl to school. She’s adorable, you know. Of course you do. You have absolutely no idea, how much I wish I could be part of your family, but I can’t. You and I both know that.
 
I’m sorry, I’m sorry, and even if I say it a million times over, I’ll never say it enough. But I did it for you. You’re happier now, without me, than you could’ve ever been with me, so I guess I’ll keep comforting myself with that fact.
 
Love,
Your forever

© 2009 Alicia™


Author's Note

Alicia™
I wanted to try writing these letter typed things again, so I wrote this. I really hope you like it!!

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Aww, this was really sweet! You captured the sorrow beautifully, and I liked the creativity of writing it in the form of a letter. There were moments where I wished that you had gone a little deeper into the emotions of the situation, however, I do think that the simplicity of the letter ended up working as an advantage to its purpose.
A heartbreaking ending, and a well-executed write! Nice work,
~PaperHearts

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is so sad but very well written

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is heartbreaking...but so beautifully written! It's very simple..but it's such a wonderful piece :)
Fantastic work,
~Lauren

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oooooh, this is sad!!! Just the thought of seeing him with his little girl.... oh, heartbreaking.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww, this was really sweet! You captured the sorrow beautifully, and I liked the creativity of writing it in the form of a letter. There were moments where I wished that you had gone a little deeper into the emotions of the situation, however, I do think that the simplicity of the letter ended up working as an advantage to its purpose.
A heartbreaking ending, and a well-executed write! Nice work,
~PaperHearts

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hahaha. Very good. I've been trying the same thing as well. I liked it, there's always a lot of emotion in these letters. Very, very nice


Posted 14 Years Ago


Very sad. Good flow and feeling! Keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago


AW.
sadsadsad.
but very well written

Posted 14 Years Ago


I don't know if its real or fiction but that letter is heartbreaking , it take so much pain to say those words, we all been there, and we all miss our former loves. I like your style , its simple and honest just like mine :) ... Yossi

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I relate completely, it made the person who was writing it really real, the voice rang true.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I like it alot! ... And you really touched me with those lines, I don't know why, if I relate to it or not, but you did! Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on October 11, 2009
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