Tell Me

Tell Me

A Poem by Alicia™
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Tell me that this is all just a lie

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Tell me this isn’t over,
That what you’re saying
Is just a lie.
 
Take me back
Into your arms,
And dry my tears.
 
Just tell me,
Tell me
That this is all

Just a lie

© 2009 Alicia™


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Very nice write! One not wanting to loose a love. Well written

Posted 13 Years Ago


Simple and meaningful poem, good write

Posted 13 Years Ago


hope it is lie......simple words to express ur strong feelings

Posted 13 Years Ago


I Loved this. Meaningful :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


I could relate to this rather easy,
the poem is well written,
clearly shown the emotions.
good poem :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Normally I object to poems of this relative length, as it is difficult to express a whole idea in so few words, but I would not want yours to be any longer than it is. Indeed to do so would distort the blunt power that the brief sentences and stanzas convey.

If I had to complain about it (and I strive to find something), I would say that, for me, anyway, I'm not sure if it pushes the right tone. The way it is written feels forceful, almost angry, but the words themselves are more of desperation. If you were going for a blend of the two, congratulations, but otherwise I confess myself a little lost.

Excellent work regardless.

Posted 14 Years Ago


The heart don't want to let go. A beautiful and sad poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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