The Dreams Visit

The Dreams Visit

A Poem by Alicia™
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The dreams never fail to visit me

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The dreams never fail to visit me
Each time something strikes the place
Where you once were.

I wait in the night each time,
Daring not fall asleep,
Knowing that my heart shall be shattered
When I awake in the morn.

Only when I have no control does it happen;
The dreams playing with freedom in my mind
When my sub-conscious is let loose while I’m asleep.
Always, my heart feels like lead in the morn.
Always, my sub-conscious betrays me.

The dreams never fail to visit me
Each time something strikes the place
Where you once were.

© 2010 Alicia™


Author's Note

Alicia™
Every time something very related to a certain someone happens, I'll dream about this person. Every single time. I didn't really do much editing to this one…

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Beautiful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dreams are a very good provider of thoughts and words to go with them. You are good at expressing that. Sometimes I am in control of my dreams and other times I am just along for the ride. Nice writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

In most good dreams we always have a happy ending. Like you stated in your words. You can awake alone and sad. I like the complete poem. The flow and story was outstanding. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


I especially like the last two lines! And I hope you soon find someone new to fill that place and bring dreams that lead to happier waking.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Such a dreamy poem!
I used to dream the dream like you, I always dream of person I see that day, more often I see my friends. Your words are very beautiful here!

Posted 9 Years Ago


this poem has a neat dreamy feel to it..nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Good write

Posted 9 Years Ago


I have that same thing happen! Weird! I am not seeing any editorial problems. You have a lovely way with words here. Beautiful poem :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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