Anchorless Voyage

     Below the canvas of fear
    I clung to the mast of hollow dreams
                                   
     I voyage the seas of despair
       On a one-man ship deserted by fortune
   Colliding waves of reality, offered no refuge
     Condemned like Odysseus, on my vessel of demise

    And when all hope seems to have washed away
     A roaring voice yells in grandeur
         "Give up not young lad, i'm watching over you"

          Awed by the thought of a deity coming to my rescue
            Or maybe it my apathy speaking to me through delusions
            If not i can only hope its friendship
         Taking the roll of a savior 

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[darem aq.]

poignant write my friend, though u need to put apostrophes when need, revise ur work.. other wise a good write .. thumbs up