Meri Dunya Pyar Say Pehlay(میری دنیا پیار سے پہہلے)

Meri bhi ik dunya thi pyar say pehlay
Pyar mazak lagta tha
Hansta tha pyar ki bat krnay walo par
Kabhi roya nehe tha
Computer pr ghanto masroof rerha tha
Dunya ki khabro say anjan retha tha
Aasman or dusray syaro par janay ka Khuwab dektha tha
Mien(Sikandar Khan) kia tha or kia ban gya...
میری بھی ایک دنیا تھی پیار س�' پہل�'
پیار م�™اک لگتا تھا
ہنستا تھا پیار کی بات کرن�' والوں پر
کبھی رویا نہہیں تھا
کمپیوٹر پر گھنٹوں مصروف رہتا تھا
دنیا کی خبروں س�' انجان رہتا تھا
آسمان اور دوسر�' سیاروں پر جان�' کا خواب دیکھتا تھا
میں(سکندر خان) کیا تھا اور کیا بن گیا�"�"�"

Author's Note

Its too short but i wrote my quick feelings on whatsapp status, then i post it here for you guyz...

Reviews

[Gaurav]

Very subtle, romantic and tragically beautiful...it expresses love as a form of struggle that everyone has to go through

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks for you valuable review Sir!

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Indeed beautiful. Love is a Modern art of a lifetime. the one who understands it. Understands Life

[Sikandar Khan]

thanks pragati...

[AJNJ]

A Short yet meaningful Urdu post. You’ve done great with your expressions. Keep writing.

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks Boss...

[wordman]

well the rhythm was on spot,great write

[Sikandar Khan]

thanks boss g...

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[¿]

The song Kaise Hua, your poem has the same emotions. Love reagent falls into life beaker's plain water and changes the whole colour to nature. Thanks for sharing Bro, be blessed**

[Sikandar Khan]

thanks for your valuable comments sis, and what a camparison with kabir singh song😂....

[¿]

This poem is a worthy one! You're welcome :)