The Beautiful Song

The Beautiful Song

A Poem by Silmara McGarry



               Look at me while I sing the beautiful song.
                Tell me that without me you can’t live on.
                Stay with me under unclouded warm sun,
                let the rays of light show you a new dawn.
                    Lay with me under glaring starry sky,
             Not ever forgetting that you will always be mine.
                         Be my knight for all my life, 
                  sharing with me unforgettable delights.
                       Soon I will be your lady in white,
           forever singing to you, the beautiful song of our lives.

© 2018 Silmara McGarry


Author's Note

Silmara McGarry
Maybe a little too romantic and sweet for some....BUT: Why not, hum?!!! 😊😉

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There's absolutely nothing wrong with being romantic or sweet! People can be so cynical about what they call sentiment.. and fair enough to each his or her own. But surely true love and needing sweet and charming words are part of a disappearing world.. Notice this was originally added in 2016, perhaps the isolation we're all feeling now in 2021 highlights what can near enough disappear overnight. To read your beautiful words really is a remedy for sore hearts. Thank you so much for sharing Silmara.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

6 Months Ago

You are so right!!! No, I am the one to thank you for your beautiful words dear Emma ;-)
emmajoy

6 Months Ago

Lovely words and am still purring!
Silmara McGarry

6 Months Ago

:-)))))) Great!!!


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I enjoyed the sweet, romantic sentiment of your poem Sil. Nothing like a touch of romance to make you feel young again and reflect on past times :) Finding that special someone, makes such a difference. Hope all is well lovely lady.

Chris

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

5 Months Ago

Hey Chris :-) Ahhh I am the one to thank you for reading and your sweet review...I wrote this poem w.. read more
Chris Shaw

5 Months Ago

Have a lovely day Sil:)
dear Sil... many passions begin with the Music of
a starry night and dreams of your Knight in shining armoire... tenderly, Pat

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

6 Months Ago

Very true!!! Many thanks indeed dear Patricia
Hugs
Sil
:-)
There's absolutely nothing wrong with being romantic or sweet! People can be so cynical about what they call sentiment.. and fair enough to each his or her own. But surely true love and needing sweet and charming words are part of a disappearing world.. Notice this was originally added in 2016, perhaps the isolation we're all feeling now in 2021 highlights what can near enough disappear overnight. To read your beautiful words really is a remedy for sore hearts. Thank you so much for sharing Silmara.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

6 Months Ago

You are so right!!! No, I am the one to thank you for your beautiful words dear Emma ;-)
emmajoy

6 Months Ago

Lovely words and am still purring!
Silmara McGarry

6 Months Ago

:-)))))) Great!!!
Romantic is good, sweet is good,
And considering being his lady in white...also a good thing.
A really strong expression of love heard here in your words,
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

6 Months Ago

Than is all good )))Thank you so much for reading and your so welcome words J.
And I'm sure it will feel like a masterpiece.

Nicely done Sil. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

3 Years Ago

Hey :-) Thank you soooo very much!!!
Have a great rest ;-)
Lovely... simply lovely, I like how it appears like a little song, Your heart softly dance though Your words, simple thoughts of the girl's dream, yet they are all her dream... the photo is so gentle, reflecting the graceful melody of Your beautiful song.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

3 Years Ago

Wonderful words like blessings to my eyes. I am so thankfullll :-)))
"Be my knight for all my life,
sharing with me unforgettable delights.
Soon I will be your lady in white,
forever singing to you, the beautiful song of our lives."

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

3 Years Ago

Thank you!!! :-)
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

:)....................
Beautiful, hopeful and kind words. I liked the positive energy of these words. When two can sing the same song. A wonderful life. Thank you Silmara for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

3 Years Ago

Thank you so very much! :-)))
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
What a wonderful sweet song of love. I enjoyed reading this eloquent promise of devotion to your knight. Wishing that your romance is as fairy-tale sweet as this offering.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

3 Years Ago

Ohhh... Many thanks dear Fabian. I am so glad you enjoyed...I wish also ;-)
See you!

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I often try to see the world with angels eyes... To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile... I Love God above all... Simple love poems are my favourite... Most of wha.. more..

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