The Beautiful Song

               Look at me while I sing the beautiful song.

                Tell me that without me you can’t live on.
                Stay with me under unclouded warm sun,
                let the rays of light show you a new dawn.
                    Lay with me under glaring starry sky,
             Not ever forgetting that you will always be mine.
                         Be my knight for all my life, 
                  sharing with me unforgettable delights.
                       Soon I will be your lady in white,
           forever singing to you, the beautiful song of our lives.

Author's Note

Maybe a little too romantic and sweet for some....BUT: Why not, hum?!!! 😊😉

Reviews

[emmajoy]

There's absolutely nothing wrong with being romantic or sweet! People can be so cynical about what they call sentiment.. and fair enough to each his or her own. But surely true love and needing sweet and charming words are part of a disappearing world.. Notice this was originally added in 2016, perhaps the isolation we're all feeling now in 2021 highlights what can near enough disappear overnight. To read your beautiful words really is a remedy for sore hearts. Thank you so much for sharing Silmara.

[Silmara McGarry]

You are so right!!! No, I am the one to thank you for your beautiful words dear Emma ;-)

[emmajoy]

Lovely words and am still purring!

[Silmara McGarry]

:-)))))) Great!!!

[emmajoygreen]

There us joy in romance and sweetness, especially at such a special time. Your words, both your playful and clever meter, make this post very, very special. Many thanks for sharing each and every word, Silmara.

[Silmara McGarry]

Truly appreciated your kindness and beautiful reviews my dearest Emma💝

[emmajoygreen]

Please excuse my typos, would never be given an A+
Em.

[Silmara McGarry]

Haha...no worries darling 🌻🤗

[Chris Shaw]

I enjoyed the sweet, romantic sentiment of your poem Sil. Nothing like a touch of romance to make you feel young again and reflect on past times :) Finding that special someone, makes such a difference. Hope all is well lovely lady.

Chris

[Silmara McGarry]

Hey Chris :-) Ahhh I am the one to thank you for reading and your sweet review...I wrote this poem when I was very young at writing, I am not sure if I would write something like this today...LOL.
See you flower
Sil
:-)))

[Chris Shaw]

Have a lovely day Sil:)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sil... many passions begin with the Music of
a starry night and dreams of your Knight in shining armoire... tenderly, Pat

[Silmara McGarry]

Very true!!! Many thanks indeed dear Patricia
Hugs
Sil
:-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Romantic is good, sweet is good,
And considering being his lady in white...also a good thing.
A really strong expression of love heard here in your words,
j.

[Silmara McGarry]

Than is all good )))Thank you so much for reading and your so welcome words J.

[Relic]

And I'm sure it will feel like a masterpiece.

Nicely done Sil. :)

[Silmara McGarry]

Hey :-) Thank you soooo very much!!!
Have a great rest ;-)

[lightsong]

Lovely... simply lovely, I like how it appears like a little song, Your heart softly dance though Your words, simple thoughts of the girl's dream, yet they are all her dream... the photo is so gentle, reflecting the graceful melody of Your beautiful song.

[Silmara McGarry]

Wonderful words like blessings to my eyes. I am so thankfullll :-)))

[Sami Khalil]

"Be my knight for all my life,
sharing with me unforgettable delights.
Soon I will be your lady in white,
forever singing to you, the beautiful song of our lives."

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank you!!! :-)

[Sami Khalil]

:)....................

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful, hopeful and kind words. I liked the positive energy of these words. When two can sing the same song. A wonderful life. Thank you Silmara for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank you so very much! :-)))

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

What a wonderful sweet song of love. I enjoyed reading this eloquent promise of devotion to your knight. Wishing that your romance is as fairy-tale sweet as this offering.

[Silmara McGarry]

Ohhh... Many thanks dear Fabian. I am so glad you enjoyed...I wish also ;-)
See you!