Surreal Love

Between the gracefulness of butterflies, 
and the enchanting sweet colours of 
a warm spring morning, delivered in the 
most surreal dance, lays my Love for you.

Between the storms in the sky and the blue 
lights that surround the angels in heaven, 
mesmerized by the look in your eyes, 
hypnotized by my Love for you.

Between each wave in the ocean, gripped by 
the motion of fresh winds and one thousand 
innocent pearls, in the hands of the singing 
mermaid, breathing calmly, sails my Love for you.

Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees, 
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly 
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you. 

Between the moon and earth, and stages of 
glowing stars, twinkling up the dark night 
with promises of light, and the great creations 
of God, reflects my Love for you.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

'Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees,
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you.'

Each and every one of your stanzas has a different mood and meaning - but still has to include that precious word. Is ther anything better than Love, Silmara. You create and share unique poetic beauty

[Silmara McGarry]

No there isn't, Love is healing and cure!
Truly appreciated dearest Emma your kind words💐

[emmajoygreen]

You are very welcome, dear Silmara

[Insight "MH"]

Between all the love poems that I have read, this is one of the most honest, pure, and affectionate, it flows so easily and reaches the heart so effectively. Applause of respect and astonishment, MH.

[Silmara McGarry]

My appreciation MH for reading and your superb words/review. Thank you ever so much :-)

[Insight "MH"]

You are welcome!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and there might be those who would scoff at this type of writing saying it is too simple and cutsie...

my thought is opposite....i love it.
it flows wonderfully....great form...but it is also full of joy and hope that real love still exists in this world...and we need more of this feeling right now.
beautiful words.
j.

[Silmara McGarry]

Ohhh... ;-) Thank you indeed!!!

[Vin]

LOVE IT!!!
yes such a beautifully captured poem- it is like floating in a dream.
Lots of love...

[Silmara McGarry]

Hey! Thank you ever so much!!! ;-)

[Sneh]

This is beautiful write, each word is placed in such way as they were destined to be there ...! Enjoyed your work :)

[Silmara McGarry]

Hey Sneh :-) Thank you indeed for reading and such gracious review! Will be reading your work ;-)read moreHey Sneh :-) Thank you indeed for reading and such gracious review! Will be reading your work ;-)
Stay well
😃🌻

[Christy the Poetic Hear..]

Your words flow with grace and beauty.
Your poem is mesmerizing since the beginning.
Wonderful writing!!!

[Silmara McGarry]

Wonderful words of yours, and my absolute greatfulness for your review! Stay well ;-)

[Richard🖌]

Ohhh-MY, Dear Sil,
And, in Free Verse Quatrains … love it! : )
What a distinct honor and privilege it is to immerse mind, heart, emotions, and soul into such a moving and intricately woven expression of passion breathed out of your depths ⁓ into your fantasy lover's heart.
With genuinely unique and tenderly soothing (albeit stirring) poetic voice and deftly skilled power of stunning metaphorical imagery, combining, heaven, earth, and Nature, your ink sweeps through one's senses as smoothly and seamlessly as windblown silk undulating to the rhythms of a soft, warm summer breeze … and, beginning each verse with "Between" is a stroke of sheer genius that pulls us into every beguiling beginning, as tho' it's a romantic mystery unfolding.

Catching my breath, let me bow most graciously and gratefully in homage and thanks to you for sharing this emblematically gorgeous peek into your heart, thank you sincerely, Sil ⁓ Richard : )


Love the dreamy mood and feel of your picture choice, too!

[Silmara McGarry]

STUNNING review dear Richard, it will keep me smiling for a longggg time! God Bless indeed!
THANK YOU!!!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

So beautiful. The gentle and kind thoughts made the reader feel and understand. The gift of beauty and love is near always. Thank you Silmara for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Silmara McGarry]

i am so glad the reader can feel this :-)
I am grateful for your kind words!!
Stay well!

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome my friend.

[KCthelastboyscout]

I wrote something similar to this about the possibility of love traveling across distance, people, places and things connecting with the person you love most. What you wrote is amazing. it will stay with me for a long time.BEAUTIFUL

[Silmara McGarry]

I know, I read it and I love it! ;-)
Well then I am happy you enjoy it to the point of not forgetting. Thank you ever so much for reading and your great review! :-)

[Bare trees]

This poem is glittering with devotion. Your style is pleasing with easy going images which I like.

[Silmara McGarry]

So kind of you to read and review it, thank you so much for your wonderful words :-)

[An owl on the moon]

This is a beautiful, transcendent painting of love, pathways of joy that seem to open in every thought of your beloved. May your love only find you both in everlasting blessings.

[Silmara McGarry]

I thank you indeed Dear Craig, for your appreciable words.
Actually, this poem was not about me or a relantioship, I guess I was really inspired..lol ;-)
But love for me is much more wonderful when is like this.

See you
:-)

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, then so grateful for your inspiration! Hoping you find this kind of love always filling your life, Silmara. Take care. :)