Surreal Love

Surreal Love

A Poem by Silmara McGarry


Between the gracefulness of butterflies, 
and the enchanting sweet colours of 
a warm spring morning, delivered in the 
most surreal dance, lays my Love for you.

Between the storms in the sky and the blue 
lights that surround the angels in heaven, 
mesmerized by the look in your eyes, 
hypnotized by my Love for you.

Between each wave in the ocean, gripped by 
the motion of fresh winds and one thousand 
innocent pearls, in the hands of the singing 
mermaid, breathing calmly, sails my Love for you.

Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees, 
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly 
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you. 

Between the moon and earth, and stages of 
glowing stars, twinkling up the dark night 
with promises of light, and the great creations 
of God, reflects my Love for you.

© 2018 Silmara McGarry


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Hello Sil, lovely lady.

Your posted image is so uplifting and your stanzas are romantic and packed with beautiful imagery. The final line in each stanza is particularly effective. Very much enjoyed the natural environment woven into the lines of your romantic offering.

Have a great weekend Sil.

Chris



Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

4 Months Ago

Hey darling Chris :-)
Many thanks indeed my dear for your beautiful words and understanding o.. read more



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So beautiful. The gentle and kind thoughts made the reader feel and understand. The gift of beauty and love is near always. Thank you Silmara for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

3 Years Ago

i am so glad the reader can feel this :-)
I am grateful for your kind words!!
Stay wel.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

I did enjoy and you are welcome my friend.
I wrote something similar to this about the possibility of love traveling across distance, people, places and things connecting with the person you love most. What you wrote is amazing. it will stay with me for a long time.BEAUTIFUL

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

3 Years Ago

I know, I read it and I love it! ;-)
Well then I am happy you enjoy it to the point of not fo.. read more
This poem is glittering with devotion. Your style is pleasing with easy going images which I like.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

3 Years Ago

So kind of you to read and review it, thank you so much for your wonderful words :-)
This is a beautiful, transcendent painting of love, pathways of joy that seem to open in every thought of your beloved. May your love only find you both in everlasting blessings.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

3 Years Ago

I thank you indeed Dear Craig, for your appreciable words.
Actually, this poem was not about.. read more
An owl on the moon

3 Years Ago

Ah, then so grateful for your inspiration! Hoping you find this kind of love always filling your lif.. read more
A deeply romantic write full of lovely descriptions.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

3 Years Ago

Thank you ever so much John, for your kind words :-)
Enchanting, beautiful and a mesmerizing write,Sil.
I love the uniqueness of this write. Very delicate and soothing piece to read :-) I could feel the warmth of that love that you are emoting to us readers. I love poems in which writers tend to use the elements of nature and existence and this is definitely one of them.
This is surely a surreal love and write :-)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

4 Years Ago

So very kind of you to read, and such wonderful review...Thank you very much indeed, Manu!
Re.. read more
A gorgeous write to say the least. What a beautiful weaving of love, nature and the soul with the promises of light...Enjoyed...:).........

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

4 Years Ago

I am glad indeed that you enjoy it ;-)
Thanks a million for your time and sweet words!
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Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..........................
A beautiful imagination of all those moments that are perfec for romantic love. Though I favor spiritual love than romantic, I love your metaphors that you have used to portrayed those moments. well written poem with free verse. these line are so touching, "Between each wave in the ocean, gripped by the motion of fresh winds and one thousand innocent pearls, in the hands of the singing mermaid, breathing calmly, sails my Love for you…"
thanks for sharing, Sil :-)

Best
szhzia

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

4 Years Ago

I also favour spiritual love. Thank you indeed Zia, for taking the time to read and such great revie.. read more
SZHZIA

4 Years Ago

I am glad to hear it. It is my pleasure to read and review and you are welcome, Sil.
Best wis.. read more
this is beautiful and heavenly. full of wonderful thoughts and imagery. great expression of faith, gratitude & glory ...

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

4 Years Ago

Faith, gratitude & glory, YES! Many thanks indeed Pete! I am truly happy that you enjoy it.
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I don't really care for the format of this poem or the references to God. No offense. ;)

But this is still damn beautiful in its imagery and word usage and the title is aptly named. The Sea is a powerfully intimate visual. 'Tis a sweet poem about the nature of love and I enjoyed it immensely.

Good job, Sil! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

4 Years Ago

Non taken ;-)

I am truly glad that you enjoy it immensely. And thanks a million for r.. read more
Lovecraft

4 Years Ago

No problem, Sil. ;)

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Added on September 2, 2016
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I often try to see the world with angels eyes... To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile... I Love God above all... Simple love poems are my favourite... Most of wha.. more..

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