Surreal Love

Surreal Love

A Poem by Silmara McGarry


Between the gracefulness of butterflies, 
and the enchanting sweet colours of 
a warm spring morning, delivered in the 
most surreal dance, lays my Love for you.

Between the storms in the sky and the blue 
lights that surround the angels in heaven, 
mesmerized by the look in your eyes, 
hypnotized by my Love for you.

Between each wave in the ocean, gripped by 
the motion of fresh winds and one thousand 
innocent pearls, in the hands of the singing 
mermaid, breathing calmly, sails my Love for you.

Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees, 
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly 
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you. 

Between the moon and earth, and stages of 
glowing stars, twinkling up the dark night 
with promises of light, and the great creations 
of God, reflects my Love for you.

© 2018 Silmara McGarry


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Hello Sil, lovely lady.

Your posted image is so uplifting and your stanzas are romantic and packed with beautiful imagery. The final line in each stanza is particularly effective. Very much enjoyed the natural environment woven into the lines of your romantic offering.

Have a great weekend Sil.

Chris



Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

4 Months Ago

Hey darling Chris :-)
Many thanks indeed my dear for your beautiful words and understanding o.. read more



Reviews

This felt like a song to me.. The repitition gives a special effect too! I loved reading this.. Beautifully woven ☺

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

4 Years Ago

Really appreciated your kind words and for taking the time to read and review. Thank you so much:-)<.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

4 Years Ago

You are welcome! My pleasure ☺
[send message][befriend] Subscribe
SKY
Your poem really reflects the true feelings of love. love is beautiful and divine.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much, dear! Indeed, love is definitely Beautiful and Divine ;-)
SKY

4 Years Ago

Welcome. Yes it is :)
What a splendiferous love poem. You weave nature and all her beauty through the affairs of the heart. You throw in a bit of spirituality. It works....and I enjoyed it. Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

4 Years Ago

Ohhh Lydia, you have me smiling :-) You got it!!!! Thanks indeed dear, I am so very glad you enjoy i.. read more
It's real easy to slip into clichés when there are a million love poems written every year. But in this case, your love poem is rich with unexpected comparisons & original-sounding ways of describing things that are familiar & relatable. I like the parallels between each couplet, starting with "between the . . . " which is one main reason your love poem sounds unique & uncommon. Rich imagery & good word choices.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

4 Years Ago

What a delight it is for me that you like this one, Miss Barley. I know by now that love poems are n.. read more
[send message][befriend] Subscribe
Hi
This is nice; a whimsical shelter for love. Thanks.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

4 Years Ago

I don't know how I miss your review. My apologies Matt. Thank you so much :-)
Fantastic:)
I could feel the love in these wonderful words,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

5 Years Ago

Many thanks indeed for taking the time to read it! I am glad you enjoy it!
You B-Blessed also.. read more
this's very good. nice.
liked the way how truly, fantastically & thought provokingly you've dripped thoughts down in such gentle words... of love. it's definitely "surreal love" that's hardly understood 'cause... it's more like season that has countless tag-lines within it. lovely. very briefly said/written!

looking forward to reading your work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

5 Years Ago

Thank youuu indeed for reading it, and your SO great review! I really appreciated ;-)

.. read more
A really well-thought piece. The repetition adds to the beauty of the poem. All the aspects of nature that you have intertwined with your feelings of love are really appreciable. Quite picturesque. Keep writing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

5 Years Ago

I am very glad you enjoy it. Thanks indeed for your wonderful review! I will ;-)
All the very.. read more
Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)

5 Years Ago

All the very best to you too, friend.
Oh wow, I really love this write, this is really good.
Beautifully written!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading it. I am indeed happy that you love it :-) See you. Sil
Adorable!!!

I think this is the on of the most passionate way of writing love poems, with pure innocence and love it rises high and high and love can reach to those places where no other powers can reach... Your poem leaves me mesmerized and I have deeply felt it's love filled voice... True love reflects it's power even when there is sunlight... Beautifully done frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

5 Years Ago

Thank you Dhiman, but adorable is your comments! I was waiting for you to read this one because I wa.. read more

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

2745 Views
37 Reviews
Shelved in 3 Libraries
Added on September 2, 2016
Last Updated on August 24, 2018

Author

Silmara McGarry
Silmara McGarry

Instagram: @sil_mcgarry, United Kingdom



About
I often try to see the world with angels eyes... To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile... I Love God above all... Simple love poems are my favourite... Most of wha.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


He will be... He will be...

A Poem by Gee