Surreal Love

Between the gracefulness of butterflies, 
and the enchanting sweet colours of 
a warm spring morning, delivered in the 
most surreal dance, lays my Love for you.

Between the storms in the sky and the blue 
lights that surround the angels in heaven, 
mesmerized by the look in your eyes, 
hypnotized by my Love for you.

Between each wave in the ocean, gripped by 
the motion of fresh winds and one thousand 
innocent pearls, in the hands of the singing 
mermaid, breathing calmly, sails my Love for you.

Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees, 
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly 
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you. 

Between the moon and earth, and stages of 
glowing stars, twinkling up the dark night 
with promises of light, and the great creations 
of God, reflects my Love for you.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

'Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees,
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you.'

Each and every one of your stanzas has a different mood and meaning - but still has to include that precious word. Is ther anything better than Love, Silmara. You create and share unique poetic beauty

[Silmara McGarry]

No there isn't, Love is healing and cure!
Truly appreciated dearest Emma your kind words💐

[emmajoygreen]

You are very welcome, dear Silmara

[Hi]

This is nice; a whimsical shelter for love. Thanks.

[Silmara McGarry]

I don't know how I miss your review. My apologies Matt. Thank you so much :-)

[Jamestown]

Fantastic:)
I could feel the love in these wonderful words,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Silmara McGarry]

Many thanks indeed for taking the time to read it! I am glad you enjoy it!
You B-Blessed also.
all best,
Sil :-)

[Adam Adams]

this's very good. nice.
liked the way how truly, fantastically & thought provokingly you've dripped thoughts down in such gentle words... of love. it's definitely "surreal love" that's hardly understood 'cause... it's more like season that has countless tag-lines within it. lovely. very briefly said/written!

looking forward to reading your work!

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank youuu indeed for reading it, and your SO great review! I really appreciated ;-)

I better go on writing then...lol... :-)

See you...
Sil :-)

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

A really well-thought piece. The repetition adds to the beauty of the poem. All the aspects of nature that you have intertwined with your feelings of love are really appreciable. Quite picturesque. Keep writing.

[Silmara McGarry]

I am very glad you enjoy it. Thanks indeed for your wonderful review! I will ;-)
All the very best Mr. Vatsal
King Regards,
Sil

[Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)]

All the very best to you too, friend.

[Karmee]

Oh wow, I really love this write, this is really good.
Beautifully written!!

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank you so much for reading it. I am indeed happy that you love it :-) See you. Sil

[Inject Positivity]

Adorable!!!

I think this is the on of the most passionate way of writing love poems, with pure innocence and love it rises high and high and love can reach to those places where no other powers can reach... Your poem leaves me mesmerized and I have deeply felt it's love filled voice... True love reflects it's power even when there is sunlight... Beautifully done frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank you Dhiman, but adorable is your comments! I was waiting for you to read this one because I wanted to know your opinion. You understand my writing. So, I am indeed very happy you liked, my friend. :-)

Thanks a million, again!
All best, and see you. Sil

[emmajoy]

Seems with Love everything finds its place and makes it more precious than life. Yet somehow, that life becomes something so normal it doesn't distort emotions. it makes them truer than true.

Your voice really does sing a beautiful tune here' each stanza adds dimension and colour. Each stanza is wonderfully powerful yet laid still with tender hands.. and heart.

Beautiful

[Silmara McGarry]

I am in most accordance with your words, It really makes it truer than true. I THANK YOU so very much for your amazing and so delightful review. You have me and my heart truly smiling. And with that, I must blow a kiss to your soul :-)

[Miss Sharon]

This is a beautiful write and written with style and perfection! I love it ~Sharon

[Silmara McGarry]

Hello Miss Sharon :-) ! Your words feel my heart with delight. I am so very glad you love it. It means a lot to me coming from a wonderful writer such as yourself. I also Love your writing. Thank you indeed. All the very Best. Sil

[Miss Sharon]

Always my pleasure fellow wordsmith! ~SP

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Whoa, this is very beautiful! The first stanza amazed me to know where you were going with it, "lays my love for you." But then your words continued to impress me, because it just got more and more beautiful.

[Silmara McGarry]

I am so very glad, I can actually feel your positive emotions :-) I am indeed happy to have impress you with the stanzas that followed. Thanks a million for reading it, and your wonderful review!!!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're very much welcome! :)

[Lorry]

A perfectly painted picture of knowing that to love, you must first accept the love given and know it is real, only then can two hearts and minds connect to give you all you have. Only then can you truly see all the beauty that surrounds us, that somehow goes unnoticed at other times.
Superbly captured thoughts, written from a unique perspective.

[Silmara McGarry]

Perfectly well said, I couldn't agree more. All is different when seen with the eyes of love. Love your reviews. Thank you so much! ;-)

[Lorry]

You're welcome :)