Envisage

Envisage

A Poem by Silmara McGarry



She waited for him that afternoon, 

heart galloping lively just with the thought of his eyes in hers; 

or the firm hands holding her pleasantly, letting her know the euphoria of fulfilment


She looks around fascinated with the vast field of yellow bitsy flowers, with delicate purple stigmas

Blooming daises in the all-colourful gardens of calmness, kissing serene sounds of the crystal waters;


Subtle wind spinning between the flowers and her lustrous hair, 

under the radiance of the celestial sun that composed the sharp blue of the sky as if in another planet


She lays down on the beds of flowers spread and there she stayed, until a deep sleep drove her to dreams beyond her reach that day


She hears an instinctive jingle, and in the middle of the field a unique antique white door; 

she does not want to leave the harmonious place, also he has not yet arrived; 

but or if he is behind that door? 

She decides to open it…..

Only to see herself sleeping under the old red oak tree in the California valley

© 2021 Silmara McGarry


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I am so jealous of this! The aspect I'm most jealous of (besides your sparkling clear magical writing) is the fact that you leave us with a gaping mystery! So many times, as writers, we feel obligated to fulfill/reveal the meaning/ending of whatever we've written, in some way that satisfies most readers who hate open-ended pieces. This reminds me how much I love open-ended pieces! I love how you exemplify the generally-accepted idea that every character in one's dream is oneself in different roles. You inject this drab dream-analysis idea with vibrant reality! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

5 Months Ago

Hey Beautiful Miss Barley !!! I hope to find you well.
So good to see you here reading my wor.. read more



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I am so jealous of this! The aspect I'm most jealous of (besides your sparkling clear magical writing) is the fact that you leave us with a gaping mystery! So many times, as writers, we feel obligated to fulfill/reveal the meaning/ending of whatever we've written, in some way that satisfies most readers who hate open-ended pieces. This reminds me how much I love open-ended pieces! I love how you exemplify the generally-accepted idea that every character in one's dream is oneself in different roles. You inject this drab dream-analysis idea with vibrant reality! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

5 Months Ago

Hey Beautiful Miss Barley !!! I hope to find you well.
So good to see you here reading my wor.. read more
not a bad place to wake out of a dream...but it seems we have our best love affairs in our imagination or dreams...
and those choices we get to make in that land.
lovely piece.
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

6 Months Ago

Hey Jacob :-)
You are so right!
Many thanks indeed for reading and your sweet review.<.. read more
A wonderful poem share my dear friend.
"She lays down on the beds of flowers spread and there she stayed, until a deep sleep drove her to dreams beyond her reach that day"
I liked the complete poem and the above lines. A proper and good ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote



Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

6 Months Ago

Hey dear friend! I hope all is well with you.
Thanks indeed for reading and your lovely words.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

Hello my dear friend and you are welcome. I enjoyed this poem.
Silmara McGarry

6 Months Ago

Many thanks indeed 🌹
I love oakwood and this touches me

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

6 Months Ago

I am glad! Thank you for reading!
Stay happy :-)
Such a beautiful, descriptive write this is. it was easy to envisage it in my mind. Very nice indeed! ~Sharon

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

6 Months Ago

Hello Miss Sharon :-)
Many thanks indeed for your visit and lovely words!!!
Hugs
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Oooh Silmara my dear friend how delicately and deeply you have touched my heart's loneliest most needful yearning tears that ache for love for a lover true like this one that is perfectly yours, I can feel myself laying amidst those beautiful flowers too waiting for him to walk through that door and take me into his strong energizing arms, I feel my breath quickened in the thought.
Your words and metaphors sing a song lovelier and more tenderly passionate than I can hardly bear, thank you for sharing your soul's beauty and that amazing picture of the tree heart and gorgeous birds, how you perfectly matched your poem's and the love birds' color too. I hope he came to you and made wondrous love in the California Valley under the old red oak tree -- thank you with my love.🤗

HUGGS!
Sammi

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

6 Months Ago

Hey Sammi :-) How lovely to read your sweet words and wonderful review, I am the one to thank you s.. read more


You have a way with words ... indeed, these take your reader gently to that very special place you so eloquently describe ....... thank you :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

6 Months Ago

Heyyy :-)

Ohhh thank you, I am glad the readers can travel on my words...lol.
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Neville

6 Months Ago


................ you are most welcome :)
Daydreaming in a place of beauty....dreaming of the touch of a handsome lover and also revelling in the embrace of the beauty that surrounds her. A gorgeous picture you have attached here, and your words cascade with lovely description that alludes very well to the dreamlike quality of your theme. I got a slight touch of 'Alice In Wonderland' from this write, too! A very soothing read, Silmara. 🌹

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

7 Months Ago

Hey Viktoria :-)
So lovely and kind words of yours, thank you ever so much dear!!!
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There's magic in the air, an adventurous need for being in another place:

' Subtle wind spinning between the flowers and her lustrous hair, ~ under the radiance of the celestial sun that composed the sharp blue of the sky as if in another planet.. '

Following such a beautiful graphic, your words have slid into the rainbow mood.. lovely!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

7 Months Ago

Hey Emma :-)
You are right, how often are we in need to be in another place, I guess very.read more
emmajoy

7 Months Ago

Thank you, am trying! Stay safe.
Delicate and beautiful.
Your word choice is exquisite ABC the foreshadowing is exquisite.

Thanks for sharing your endelible poetry.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silmara McGarry

7 Months Ago

Too kind of you to read and such lovely words.
Thank you ever so much m.s. early
Stay .. read more

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I often try to see the world with angels eyes... To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile... I Love God above all... Simple love poems are my favourite... Most of wha.. more..

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