The Butterfly Kiss

Among angels she dances, emerging and flying, 

disappearing gracefully yet no more tears to cry. 

What a fascinating creature, alluring them all,

no one can slash her wings because she knows no fall 

 

Again and again she emerges as if life has no end, 

spinning around their heads in entrancing speed. 

What more could she do since her magic is endless?

Intriguing are their thoughts as why she has been 

so restless

 

Does this being really exists or is all just a dream? 

no she has realms in different dimensions that is why 

you can't see. 

Learn to upspring above the planet so you can make 

sense of her, 

although that is impossible for the butterfly is dead.

Reviews

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Your poem is a captivating and thought-provoking work of art that explores the concept of a mystical being that exists beyond the boundaries of our world. The way you describe the character's movements and the allure she has over others is both enchanting and mesmerizing, and the ending is a poignant reminder of the fleeting nature of life. The way you write about the character's existence in different dimensions is particularly intriguing, and it adds an extra layer of depth to the poem. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem and was left feeling inspired and curious about the world beyond our own.

[Silmara McGarry]

Your review is absolutely wonderful and to the point dear! You have a very good understanding of poetry and for that I congratulate you 🌟
Many thanks indeed 🌹

[red93]

Poignant, lovely and excellent Sil. Love the Artwork as well ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️ 100/100.

[Silmara McGarry]

How kind of you! Many thanks indeed for reading and your great review 🌼

[Pete]

delicate beauty emerging from metamorphosis. there is more than meets the eye. calls reality into question. beautiful said ... :)

[Silmara McGarry]

Yes!
Thanks indeed for reading and your splendid review dearest Pete😊

Enjoy your new week ahead 🤍

[An owl on the moon]

Such a beautiful, bittersweet journey of words... of wings... There is a wonder there in this world... in the rising light... and falling darkness. Feeling so much of that dream right now... pausing to read these sighs again... and again feeling the butterfly falling to earth...

[Silmara McGarry]

I know exactly what you mean! Many thanks indeed for reading and your superb review dearest 🤍
read moreI know exactly what you mean! Many thanks indeed for reading and your superb review dearest 🤍
Enjoy your weekend 🌈

[An owl on the moon]

Hope to always be reading more of you. 🤍

[Silmara McGarry]

Much appreciated dear🤍

[emmajoygreen]

The sight of a butterfly brings such delight that one is left feeling as if in another and kinder place.
No matter the sun or breeze, a butterfly still visits, flits and flies, settles and lingers, a guardian angel in disguise.
Even if she's destined to fade into her beautiful heaven, that creatures's place is a reminder, a once hope that somehow outlasts the pitch dark of a long night.
Sliding off my soapbox.. sorry.. I wish you joy, dear Silmara.

[Silmara McGarry]

Indeed and lovely description dearest Emma!!!
Thank you truly for your kindness 🤍💖
read moreIndeed and lovely description dearest Emma!!!
Thank you truly for your kindness 🤍💖
Beau new week ahead 🍀

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Some folks pin dead butterflies to boards and spray them with fixative to immortalize them. But they can never recapture the freedom and flutter of the living thing. I much prefer to see them dancing among the flowers. Lovely poem, F.

[Silmara McGarry]

Hello Fabian!
I am in agreement with you....That is so sad.
Many thanks indeed for reading dear.
Have a wonderful day :-)

[JE Falcon]

I loved this poem, then I died with the butterfly. --- So sad, the ending, or beginning, or just another phase in the never-ending cycle. Great Poem! --- Thanks.

[Silmara McGarry]

Yessss, the never ending cycle!!!
I am the one to thank you, Truly appreciated your lovely comment dear😊

[barleygirl]

Your poem reminds me of my coping mechanism for life these days, floating above it all, being in a realm where I don't see & feel all that is not impacting me. It's good to be cognizant of how tough it is for other people, but we can't let ourselves become bogged down by all the bad news in this world. I vote for taking the path of the butterfly kiss (((HUGS)))

Gorgeous photo! *winK! wink!*

[Silmara McGarry]

So wonderful to hear from you always dear!!! I hope you are well, health and with the grace of angels, happy :-))
I know and understand quite well what you mean, I myself find it much easier to live like this most days. I believe... feel and live it all but little or no attachment. Very glad indeed that the butterfly kiss is your liking path this days....
Thank you ever so much!!!
Kisses and hugs :-)))

[Relic]

Beautifully done, Sil. "For the trumpet will sound, the dead will be raised imperishable, and we will be changed." Transformation and renewal will always be related to the butterfly. They bring good luck in dreams I hear. :)))

[Silmara McGarry]

Hello!!! Many thanks indeed for your very optimist review and truly Very well said dear poet friend!!! I heard the same ;-)
See you
:-)))

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" No one can slash her wings, because she knows no fall" ... What a perfect line to describe the most alluring, beautiful, angelic creature to describe! She is beauty , happiness and freedom personified... That's why so angelic and your words decribed that so beautifully.

A very soothing, nice poem shared here... Thank you Silmara for this wonderful write

[Silmara McGarry]

I am indeed glad you enjoy it dear! And truly appreciate your review. Many, many thanks!!!
Have a wonderful weekend and stay well
:-))
Sil