Your poem is a captivating and thought-provoking work of art that explores the concept of a mystical being that exists beyond the boundaries of our world. The way you describe the character's movements and the allure she has over others is both enchanting and mesmerizing, and the ending is a poignant reminder of the fleeting nature of life. The way you write about the character's existence in different dimensions is particularly intriguing, and it adds an extra layer of depth to the poem. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem and was left feeling inspired and curious about the world beyond our own.
Posted 9 Months Ago
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9 Months Ago
Your review is absolutely wonderful and to the point dear! You have a very good understanding of poe.. read moreYour review is absolutely wonderful and to the point dear! You have a very good understanding of poetry and for that I congratulate you 🌟
Many thanks indeed 🌹
Title, poem and pic are outstanding. Butterflies are truly what we feel about angels and you state that marvelously. They flutter around happily as if in a dance to keep us in their trance. They do it with ease and much grace as if kissing the flowers here and there.
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Yes, I agree, butterfliesangels....I even thought about that while writing this poem. Many, many tha.. read moreYes, I agree, butterfliesangels....I even thought about that while writing this poem. Many, many thanks indeed dear Sami for your beautiful review :-)
An amazing poem of grace and intrigue; of life spinning around, of different dimensions; of angels, of magic; your words conjure up such ethereal images and the photos is a perfect match.
Excellent poem.
Best, Betty
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
So kind of you Betty🌺Thank you ever so much for reading and your great review!!! Stay happy :-))).. read moreSo kind of you Betty🌺Thank you ever so much for reading and your great review!!! Stay happy :-)))
It was hard for me to pick a poem of yours to read, because each and every name sounded so pretty and intriguing, so you can bet I'll be back to review more! I really adored this, piece, it's just absolutely brilliant. It's so dreamily written and each rhyme is so spot on and quite catchy. Thank you so much for sharing such a gorgeous piece! I hope you're doing well and keep on writing!
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
That is indeed very kind of you :-) If I may suggest two of my poems that maybe you would like: Surr.. read moreThat is indeed very kind of you :-) If I may suggest two of my poems that maybe you would like: Surreal Love and Hopeful Children!
I am so glad you enjoy it. And no, I am the one to thank you so very much for your review and sweet words. Much appreciated dear.
Have a very pleasant weekend.
See you
:-)))
Sil
2 Years Ago
Thank you! I will be absolutely checking those ones out!
Ohhhh...Can you believe that I just noticed that you already read and reviewed Surreal Love about 5 .. read moreOhhhh...Can you believe that I just noticed that you already read and reviewed Surreal Love about 5 months ago :-))))) Thank you again dear!!!! I will be reading more of your work, gladly :-)))
2 Years Ago
Haha, I completely forgot! I absolutely loved that piece! I'll still be returning to read more of yo.. read moreHaha, I completely forgot! I absolutely loved that piece! I'll still be returning to read more of your work! (:
Hey Miss Sharon :-) So kind of you for reading and your sweet review. Thank you so much dear!!! read moreHey Miss Sharon :-) So kind of you for reading and your sweet review. Thank you so much dear!!!
Stay well
:-)))
A Butterfly is a messenger that guides our thoughts…. then emerges into the dusk where dreams are covered with wings that someday will fly away to inspire the birds and all who pray. tenderly, Pat
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Beautiful! Thank you so much dear Pat!
All the very best.
:-)
Sil
... gently does it .... what a delightful introduction to your work my friend .. I am sure to read many more ..
All Good Things,
Neville
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Many thanks indeed dear Neville for your kind words. Then I should write more....lol
Stay hap.. read moreMany thanks indeed dear Neville for your kind words. Then I should write more....lol
Stay happy
:-)))
Tis true, the briefer the visit the most beautiful and memorable the visitors.. and that is the brief life-span of butterflies. They suddenly arrive, dance over blossom such as wild buddleia; coy creatures. they hide if people go near them! Then, having charmed us clomping, chomping human beings, they delicately flutter 0ff and away as if colourless tissue caught in a gentle breeze. And yes, they make a simple poet turn to jelly!
Your poem echoes my feelings for butterflies'; when their season is done, seems coloured light has disappeared - albeit died. from various parts of my garden. Sigh.. Your poem is beautiful.
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
So Great your understanding dear Emma!!! And also true, sadly they don't last very long. Thanks a mi.. read moreSo Great your understanding dear Emma!!! And also true, sadly they don't last very long. Thanks a million for your thoughtful review darling!
Have a pleasant night!
Hugsss
Sil
:-)))
"what more can she do since her magic is endless".... that's a really good line
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
I am so grateful for reading and your sweet review. Many thanks indeed Dennis, I like that line also.. read moreI am so grateful for reading and your sweet review. Many thanks indeed Dennis, I like that line also :-)
Stay well
Sil
:-)
Artwork and words were wonderful my dear friend. I told my grandchildren. See a butterfly, make a wish. Here in Michigan. We rarely see now. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
I am indeed very thankful dear friend for reading and your sweet review. Now I will also make a wish.. read moreI am indeed very thankful dear friend for reading and your sweet review. Now I will also make a wish when I see a butterfly :-)) And I hope they come back to Michigan!!! Have a great evening.
See you
Sil
:-)
2 Years Ago
I saw one today dear Silmara and I made a wish. Hello from Michigan and I hope you are doing well.
2 Years Ago
You did now?!!! I am truly happy for you, and I hope your wish come true !!!! I am doing great and h.. read moreYou did now?!!! I am truly happy for you, and I hope your wish come true !!!! I am doing great and hope you are also :-)))
I often try to see the world with angels eyes...
To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile...
I Love God above all...
Simple love poems are my favourite...
Most of wha.. more..