Spattering Emotions

Spattering Emotions

A Poem by SilentNiaAngel
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A Poem about Emotions

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Spattering Emotions:

 

My emotions are in turmoil.

 

Running into nowhere.

 

Striving for destiny.

 

What cannot be seems to be fine.

 

Emotions fly everywhere.

 

Destroying my inner beauty.

 

They hurt the one I love.

 

They hurt my friends.

 

They hurt my family.

 

Most of all, it breaks my heart.

 

So sensual and convincing.

 

I hate them.

 

They erupt

 

They danger

I hate my spattering emotions

 

© 2012 SilentNiaAngel


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SilentNiaAngel
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Yeah emotions will trigger you deep like that.
I hate that when it happens. Well expressed and written.
Like your style!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a great write! I hate my emotions at times too, but without them there would be no joy either. So I guess I have a love/hate relationship with my emotions... but would be unable to have that kind of relationship with anything if it weren't for my emotions. Haha. This poem has evoked a lot of thought. Awesome poem. :)
~Rae

Posted 12 Years Ago


Emotions can cause a swirl of chaos...It can throw you in a storm of hurt... facing the storm can be therapeutic. This is well expressed. Nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful!


Posted 12 Years Ago


Thats true.i hate mines too.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is deep, heartfelt and relatable. It also allows the reader to catch a glipse into this spattering of emotions you are writing about. Excellent Job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing poetry. The powerful words took me into the emotion and the desire of the words. Your description and use of language gave life to your words. Thank you for the excellent poem. Welcome to the site.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 14, 2012
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Tags: Poem, Lonely, sad, happy, Poetry

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SilentNiaAngel

Montego Bay, St.James, Jamaica



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