Like I'm Venom

Like I'm Venom

A Poem by SilentNiaAngel
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A Short Poem I wrote while crying my eyes out after a terrible situation that had happen=)

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Like I'm  Venom


Dissolving my soul into darkness

As i whimper for hope

Dissolving my heart into shame

As I scream for love

Dissolving my mind into a lost dessert

As I claim for you to listen to my dreams

Dissolving my personality into invisible

Like the air that's never seen

Dissolving my  words into nothing

As I try to reach others with a gentle small

Dissolving  me into toxic

Like I'm a venom

Never to be seen or tasted!


 

© 2012 SilentNiaAngel


Author's Note

SilentNiaAngel
A Poem I wrote while crying my eyes out!!!!

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deep and emotional

Posted 12 Years Ago


Venom is toxic... but pouring your heart into this piece is well expressed! Keep going...the release will be the best medicine for the Venom. Nice write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


cool poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


A beautiful poem and not really
venomous at all.
You sou;nd like a sweet girl who
has been abused.
God bless.
---- John

Posted 12 Years Ago


A powerful poem. A lot of hidden story in the words. The statements were direct and honest. I enjoyed the complete poem. The ending made this poem complete. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was easy to read and to experience....i like the common way you start each thought.....

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh i am so sorry, i like the write though!

Posted 12 Years Ago


a powerful poem full of emotion, love it especially the last 3 lines

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 14, 2012
Last Updated on April 14, 2012
Tags: Poem, Lonely, sad, happy, Poetry, venom

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SilentNiaAngel
SilentNiaAngel

Montego Bay, St.James, Jamaica



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