Drunk In Blood

Drunk In Blood

A Poem by SilentNiaAngel
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A Small Poem

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DRUNK IN BLOOD


I've cut myself with your words

I've cut myself with your meaningful stares

I've cut myself with bruises you made

I've cut myself with your constant stabbing of your raping

I've cut myself with you hits

I've cut my with your scissors

I've cut myself with you're knife

I've cut myself with torn paper

I've cut myself with tears

I've cut my my heart with your forbidden love

How deep have i been cut?

I can't say

I can't see

Cuz I'm Drunk in BLOOD!!!!

© 2012 SilentNiaAngel


Author's Note

SilentNiaAngel
A Poem I write while pretending to be an Emo.

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Very interesting indeed. And dark.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Interesting write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was pretty good. I like the repetition in it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ok I know I'm old, what's an Emo?
I knew a cutter once a stripper in a burbon street bar. How did you get those scars? I asked her. It was a joke she said. No one understood the punch line. And she smiled, sad a slow.
the subject of your poem is one of great pain and feeling as such I would advise a somewhat lighter hand with the subject. Trust yourself and the subject take a small step back, emotional intensity doesn't need to shout to be heard.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very powerful poem, Imagery is very graphic to me. Emo indeed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a pretty powerful sad read. Well expressed emotions.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the use of repetition in this poem. Made the point loud and clear. I like the flow of thoughts and the very strong ending. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem is powerful, and repeating the line "I've cut myself" makes it even more powerful. I'd say you've done a good job pretending to be an emo, the poem is very good.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 14, 2012
Last Updated on April 14, 2012
Tags: Poem, Poetry, Blood, Tears, lonely

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SilentNiaAngel
SilentNiaAngel

Montego Bay, St.James, Jamaica



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