one wish..

just a short love poem, it's not a serious one.. just a small cute one c:

If i could have one wish..
I'd spend the whole day with you,

I'd never let go.

I'd stare at the sky, so blue,

I'd hold you so tight, until you say so.

If i could have one wish..
I'd play with your hair all day,
I'd make you cake.
I'd give you snuggles all the way.
Why i'd even cook you a steak!

If i could have one wish..
Darling, i don't care what we do.
The beach, a movie..
Aslong as i'm with you.

If i could have on wish,
i'd spend it with you.

Author's Note

Just, say what you want.. any criticism is welcome! it'll just help more :-)

Reviews

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Very good poem. I love the way your stanzas flow together. Great write!

[luna11]

This is sweet :D
I really like it.
xx

[Distant horizons]

Nicely done. Great flow

[Richy Moon]

Sweet peom, for sure. I like it :)

[Rae Emeral]

Super sweet little poem! Love it! :)
~Rae Emeral

[Teenage Romeo]

I like the little couplets this is really cute:)