Chemistry Betrays (Revised)

Chemistry Betrays (Revised)

A Poem by Silente-Write
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Insanity Pleads...

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My chemistry betrays me as insanity pleads before lean-jaded depravity
seen scorn as a decrepit unraveling
of baffling mean-spirited entities gathering deceitfully
for more pandering of reality in a gallery slinging misery entirely...

My sympathy behaves erratically
seethes forlorn as heated apathy forms rapidly
soft-churning rhapsody squirms passionately...

Inevitably heart-warming tragedy occurs.

Fiendishly hard-earned philosophy
turns of metaphor laced individuality...

Blurred and slurred rhymes.

Aggressive lines wormed into the tapestry of sadism
this organisms mechanism of limelight fading posturism
burning eyes turning bright from realism
shading light from mine minds rind empty escapism
slime heavy kinda heady with the infectious algorithm...

 Swirls bleeding lecherous breathing escaping the rhythm of morbid reality
 curiosity yearns for instability
With the itty-bitty fallacy of a gallant killing spree
 gallons of rippling prayers stripped of buoyancy
 floating dead in the sea flamboyantly... 

© 2017 Silente-Write


Author's Note

Silente-Write
Same poem (mostly)... But now edited... Yay...!

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the velocity of your perspicacity of the duplicity of words specificity makes the bunny's brain nuerocity spark enthusiastically! LOL.... my god I have met my match!!!! You love words and they love you I know cause they just told me my dictionary just salivated all over my desk and started to groan in an unsightly manner causing me to have to clean up some unmentionable goo... be sure to put the dictionary farther away from the word porn next time. :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

11 Months Ago

Words are fun, flow structure is what this was intended for, aha... I f*****g died laughing when I s.. read more



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I am not surprised that 'insanity pleads'. The so called sanity in life often seems far more insane! Your wonderful poem is full of clever and evocative words. ( one word I did not understand 'shading light from my minds RIND?) The rhyme scheme is interesting, and the words move along beautifully, although with a slight feeling of 'blurred and slurred'. Was this deliberate? And although those rippling prayers stripped of bouyancy' were dead, there somehow seems to be some hope in that they were floating flamboyantly. Enjoyable read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

Lmao......
Great Aunt Astri

2 Years Ago

Ugh? ................?
Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

I have no clue anymore... Brain-frozen spoons...?
Very tragic and dark but true words spoken of existing human atrocities!! Great write!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! How wonderfully you have stitched words in the poem. I could've never thought the way you look at things! What an eloquent and enjoyble piece. I'm very very impressed!
Keep writing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

Wow, why thank you, Soumya... I appreciate the impressive appreciation very much...
A chaotic life that twist reality within the mind forming all kinds of catastrophic thoughts. Pinch in a little anger brewing and you get this mixed blender of emotions

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

You slammed the door shut on this one, Poetic... Hah, nice insight, a catastrophic review of blended.. read more
Poetic Beauty

2 Years Ago

I'm glad I understood your poem.
Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

You should be gladder than glad... Thanks again
Just hearing it sounds good even if I don't try to decipher the meaning, although I do recognize the tags. Keep writing my friend.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Relic... Meaning is overrated... As is contextual perspective... Take what you will, and .. read more
I love your use of vocabulary and rhyme schemes. "Aggressive lines wormed into the tapestry of sadism" I love your writing, it's very enjoyable. Thanks!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

I love your appreciation! That was a fun line to write... Glad you enjoyed... Thanks, and you are we.. read more
Lyrical poignant write with words that sing , I need a dictionary...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Moon, it means a lot to hear
The word combinations are epic! through gallons of prayers, and desperate escape from reality we coat ourselves with an impenetrable veil of ignorance... Definitely an addition to my library :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

I always welcome the insight of someone with such excellent music taste... Keep rocking the strings,.. read more
Ana B.

2 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Yup. Again, the rhythm and cadence flows. "...gallons of rippling prayers stripped of buoyancy floating dead in the sea flamboyantly": genius. I totally got that...I think. Lots of people's prayers are just words and never get past the ceiling. I like your stuff, dude, and I'm not really a poetry kinda person, but you...you are a good read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

Well thank you again, Carol... It means a lot to me to know I can help bend genres a bit in peoples .. read more
Very intense, yet I love the feeling of it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

Intense things are sometimes the most loved things, Maria... Thanks

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Silente-Write

Denver, CO



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