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Chemistry Betrays (Revised)

Chemistry Betrays (Revised)

A Poem by Silente-Write
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Insanity Pleads...

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My chemistry betrays me as insanity pleads before lean-jaded depravity
seen scorn as a decrepit unraveling
of baffling mean-spirited entities gathering deceitfully
for more pandering of reality in a gallery slinging misery entirely...

My sympathy behaves erratically
seethes forlorn as heated apathy forms rapidly
soft-churning rhapsody squirms passionately...

Inevitably heart-warming tragedy occurs.

Fiendishly hard-earned philosophy
turns of metaphor laced individuality...

Blurred and slurred rhymes.

Aggressive lines wormed into the tapestry of sadism
this organisms mechanism of limelight fading posturism
burning eyes turning bright from realism
shading light from mine minds rind empty escapism
slime heavy kinda heady with the infectious algorithm...

 Swirls bleeding lecherous breathing escaping the rhythm of morbid reality
 curiosity yearns for instability
With the itty-bitty fallacy of a gallant killing spree
 gallons of rippling prayers stripped of buoyancy
 floating dead in the sea flamboyantly... 

© 2017 Silente-Write


Author's Note

Silente-Write
Same poem (mostly)... But now edited... Yay...!

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the velocity of your perspicacity of the duplicity of words specificity makes the bunny's brain nuerocity spark enthusiastically! LOL.... my god I have met my match!!!! You love words and they love you I know cause they just told me my dictionary just salivated all over my desk and started to groan in an unsightly manner causing me to have to clean up some unmentionable goo... be sure to put the dictionary farther away from the word porn next time. :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

11 Months Ago

Words are fun, flow structure is what this was intended for, aha... I f*****g died laughing when I s.. read more



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Man, you can just read this without even trying to understand it one bit and it just sings with juxtaposed vowel sounds anyway!
Of course, within it are sadly beautiful, precisely placed emotionally philosophical condensations of the deepest shadow, as though we are in the furthest interior recesses of another, at the coal face of the 'mind's mine', each verbal energy forged with the perfectly chosen markers that are conveyed by all of these, this collection of flowing and desperately tragic feeling words.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

You nailed it, to be succinct and simplistic with my words... But in all honesty... I like how you s.. read more
Brett Hernan

2 Years Ago

Do you know any musicians?

If not, put up a hand-written sign at the local guitar sh.. read more
I can not pretend to understand the meaning of this poem. Though, that's likely more a fault of mine than of your writing. I do like the alliteration and splashy choice of words. I've been told to avoid alliteration because it's tacky, but you, my friend, have found a niche with it. Like someone who's mastered the yo yo, you've taken something simple and honed it down to an impressive skill

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

3 Years Ago

Seeing as I love Yo-Yo's... I will take that as a grand compliment, haha... Thank you, No Scholar, b.. read more
it's like delving into the mind of a mass murderer...and the things that have pushed him to the brink of the insanity...the mind breaking...the tolerance ended---even if there really is no reason---the monster is created...you delve into his mind like dean koontz gets into the head of his evil characters...then we have more of an understanding...and sometimes even a bit of sympathy for the devil..so to speak.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

3 Years Ago

Did you just compare me to Dean Koontz... What a friggin' amazing compliment... Thanks so much, Jaco.. read more
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I love your style
this is absolutely stunning
i am baffled
this chemistry of one's heart
making the world turn
and tumble

amazing

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

3 Years Ago

Amazing insight, Starz, and much appreciated... Thank you...
That flow of words is mind-blowing. Grace and strong vocabulary combined makes a wonderful piece, just like this!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

3 Years Ago

A graceful and mind-blowing review of your own, Rimpi... Thank you...
A masterpiece! For me, there is no other way to describe it. This poem is simply a masterpiece.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

3 Years Ago

A masterpiece of appreciation, Flame, truly... Thank you...
A little flame

3 Years Ago

You are most welcome(:
This was so enjoyable to read through. The rhythm and word use awesome. I loved how it was almost a pause in the middle with "Blurred and slurred rhymes".

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

3 Years Ago

I love that pause as well, B.A... Thanks so much...
"Inevitably heart-warming tragedy occurs."
That burn in your chest when you ache, love, hurt and wish, all at the same time?



Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

3 Years Ago

Wow, Dream... What a dreamy, and quite spot-on take... Thank you...
Love it! This made me laugh! I don't know if that was your intent, but the flamboyant imagery and pulsating rhythmic rhyming scheme made me want to pull out my bass guitar and give it a bass riff! Great imagination and totally original.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

3 Years Ago

Pulsating rhythmic madness... I dig the heck outta your view on this, and more importantly... I dig .. read more
The Iron Horseman

2 Years Ago

You're welcome.
I'm envious of your vocabulary. I love this poem. The imagery and wording are spot-on. Fantastic work.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

3 Years Ago

Envy is the beginning of progress, in some, and in others... The beginning of the end... Love the re.. read more

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Silente-Write

Denver, CO



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