Free-Falling Alone...

A Poem by Chase Dylan

Rags-n-Aberrations

I sputter when I spit and spatter, taste of matter, waste of grave rattle

Brave hatter, mad gravity grafter, laughter disaster, gray pitter-patter

The rains of brains after the lame-after-ache, same pass-and-take, please often make rainbows exist in travels, burned tomes are learned, unravel more paste and batter

Rags-n-Aberrations

After the master gabber, I'm a faster blaster, a mix of traveler 'n' masker

Basket of basking travesty, carnival blur carved in mirth...

An alabaster bur

A word unheard... A song unlearned

Like bong of worth stirred and perched

I'm slurped and burped...

Stripped of dirt, the earth is burnt in crispy birth

I'm earnest in turning over every stone

unfurling my throne

no one is owed...

I'm free-falling on my own

© 2017 Chase Dylan

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Island Hippy

Aloha silente, old skool for days! Nui (much) kudos for your swerve and flow.
Loved this....

"An alabaster bur
A word unheard... A song unlearned
Like bong of worth stirred and perched
I'm slurped and burped...
Stripped of dirt, the earth is burnt in crispy birth"

Izzy

Posted 6 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

Hii, Hippy of the Islands...! Thanks for the drop-in, appreciate it much, especially the old-school .. read more

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Cecelia A. Green

WOW powerful! Again with the perfect rhymes!!!
Always love to read your writing!

Posted 6 Years Ago

Jessica Lima

I don't know why but this poem seemed very fast paced to me. I was reading it extremely fast without meaning to!

And the last stanza describes how I feel most days!

Posted 6 Years Ago

Paul Bell

Alabaster bur should be the phrase of the year.
That is one great ending to this wacky poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

Haha, I know right...! I was obsessed with that word for two weeks... I still am, but will not admit.. read more

6 Years Ago

Though i may be borrowing it. lol

jellycat94

I'm free-falling through this poem, and I love it. You know how in cartoons, sometimes they'll show a character falling through the branches of trees, bouncing from one branch to another? Your poem has that sensation, but without the discomfort, haha this was so much fun! And the word play was exciting :D

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

Lmao, what a colorful review, Jelly... This was a wonderful drop of words to an (un)comfortable spla.. read more

Sami Khalil

You don't leave a stone turned to not find surprises, words to not fit meanings and music to not flow with songs. A free fall feeling of easy discovery and owed confrontation head on. Marvelous you are...:)..............

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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6 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you kindly. ...::::))))

6 Years Ago

Of course...

6 Years Ago

:)......................

barleygirl

Your word play really DOES feel like free-falling thru the ponderings of the mind! Your rhyming & sound combinations are fun & startling & a little bit like "rap" music but also much more unique sounding. You've used many unusual words that have interesting sounds & meanings . . . even tho I'm not getting an overall message understanding here, it's okay, cuz it's a fun read. Sometimes we just want to play with words & sounds! *smile*

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

Exactly, Barley... Truly exactly, hah... I love your take on this whimsical free-fall of emotion... .. read more

pia

Well Doolin
You are not just good with poetry
U are also great.
I love the words used here and some how the way you structure your poems makes them fit so perfectly and make em really clear for the readers to picture every word
Love itt