Questionably Questioned...

Questionably Questioned...

A Poem by Chase Dylan
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Chest-earner...

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Questionably questioned by the quest-givers
I'm a chest-earner
and I dig deeper to find lines that place my rhymes inside your mind tonight...
I'm a dark dragon seeking a stark mistress on a dime...
No warlock circle to burn on my skin
I am a sin of worthlessness in the lurch of learning magic whips...
I'm a laughingstock as the tablet flips tables of woe
Blows and throes...
I'm not Thor, no hammer and cord...
A zoid, I am moist...
Rejoice that my voice can transform transcribe describe...
Imagine the blight that will rise when they copy my hidden light
this time I'm "ite"...
Divine blind and now I free-grab rewind so the bee-line can define bright lies...
Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime...
Slide your fines in the one-way ticket receiver and bide your brine so the wet can align with the vetting of your soul...
Whole toll is folded...
A paper-heart in a socket wrapped in a pocket
I'm on a rocket ship marked with lips like a dark kiss...
Wish I had no lisp but after today I wish the rips and wasp dips would leave me tossing and turning...
Needing grit...?
 Oh, you wish...

© 2017 Chase Dylan


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Powerful and worthwhile words my friend.
"Divine blind and now I free-grab rewind so the bee-line can define bright lies...
Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime..."
The above lines were my favorite. The words hones and direct. My kind of poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

Thanks very much, Poetry... The bee-line really IS my favorite, heh... My kind of review...
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
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Wow man this was sick! Your rhymes were flowing perfectly together, sweet! I loved this line in particular however:

"I dig deeper to find lines that place my rhymes inside your mind tonight"

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

That is a favorite of mine, as well... As it shows traces of the darker side of my somewhat fluffed .. read more
Kesha

6 Years Ago

Yes it certainly does! It's awesome!
I love this I will write this over and over. You are a great writer and thank you for reading mine and your comment

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Angel...! My pleasure, and I appreciate the drop-in
angel

6 Years Ago

You are welcome my pleasure and I love to read poems. Well written
"bitter like winter on the back of grime"
That s**t's brilliant.
Your stuff always begs a second read.
I'm a fan, Sil.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

Ah, well thank you again, Grinder... Winter is usually only concerned with being clean, heh, so it m.. read more
I find this unquestionably well constructed. The last four lines are a well-timed, beautiful ribbon , on the middle of the piece. It flows, and starkly shows your command of language and its nuance. Another impressive effort.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

Thanks very much, Grinder... This is an impressive review, and I appreciate it...
Powerful and worthwhile words my friend.
"Divine blind and now I free-grab rewind so the bee-line can define bright lies...
Behind enemy lines my wine is bitter like winter on the back of grime..."
The above lines were my favorite. The words hones and direct. My kind of poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

Thanks very much, Poetry... The bee-line really IS my favorite, heh... My kind of review...
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
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Those words just took me to another dimension!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

Your review took me to another dimension of appreciation... Thank you so much, Rimpi..!
Amazing poem, you're words take me to a completely different place.This poem captures the imagination and leaves us with much questions. Really great

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Mist, your words captured my heart with joy...
You took me on an adventure with you but with your words! A very creative poem. I love it!

Love,
Vasilees

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

Your review took me on an adventure of praise, Vasilees, thanks so much...
this is certainly a creative write

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

An even more creative review from the Man of Words, himself... Well maybe not... But still... Thanks.. read more
sound like you've been to an adventure or ready no matter what... A very interesting poem....

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

Thanks very much, Aries, I def' have...

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Chase Dylan
Chase Dylan

Denver, CO



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