Sacred Vapors

Sacred Vapors

A Poem by Silente-Write
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Submarine-stage...

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I'm untamed
Insane brain lame-reined in to fillet saber-lain drains
In labor I gain ravens braver than slavers able to savor gall-breaker takers
if you're in favor lets rape-her and traverse papers for diverse capers
I'm tapered
a subversive undertaker of faker law-makers
on sacred vapors I'm a shaker of all traitors
Belays raided faded duration sated gated by lesions on nations
Fulmination of generations slated in gray
Painted on a submarine stage
a rage in a cage set like a face-plant
I'm like Abraham and freed the slaves of verbal-trends
I'm global-sent and vorpal-bent
but low-rent keeps me lent to the lamb
I'm slammed and lambasted
ran outta RAM by a ram slipperier than grand
By ghosts boasted most toast by the roastiest roach
I puff a roach 
roast a goat
loads of moats rowed alone
Host is over-grown
sober toned loans and blown-out foam
roam ah-doam and sloped groans
I'm holier than the boast of those ghost hosts
No tone

© 2017 Silente-Write


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Silente-Write
Umm... Stuff...

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You're back in the groove, my friend! My favourite lines in this one are:
"a subversive undertaker of faker law-makers
on sacred vapors I'm a shaker of all traitors
Belays raided faded duration sated gated by lesions on nations
Fulmination of generations slated in gray
Painted on a submarine stage".
Keep 'em coming!


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Horseman, it is much appreciated
The Iron Horseman

2 Years Ago

You're welcome, Silente.



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sober toned loans and blown-out foam
roam ah-doam and sloped groans
I'm holier than the boast of those ghost hosts
No tone

LOVE this part, This is a really good. Enjoyed this

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

5 Months Ago

Thanks very much, Brandie
I love your love for my loved lines, thanks again
Too cool. This reminds me of the poetry done by Jack Kerouac. Are you familiar with him?

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

5 Months Ago

Thanks so much! Sorry it has taken a minute to reply! Been away for a while. I am not familiar... Bu.. read more
Lots of comparism and vuvid imagery. Well crafted.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate that... Comparison is important!
Very well penned! Keep writing

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

Thanks, Katy... Stealing my lines of praise...! Hah
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reminds me of a mix of Kerouac poeticising to jazz and some great hip hop verse, grabs you right from the start.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

NO clue what that "Kerouac" is, but I am now intrigued, hah... Thank you, I def love hip hop
your wordplay is out of this world dude. i mean, geez i thought i was good, iv never read or heard anything like you create. you must got a mastermind or something. this is real clever and ingenious stuff you got

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

Wow, thank you so much, Jackie... Lots of practice and hard work= A "mastermind", heh...
You're back in the groove, my friend! My favourite lines in this one are:
"a subversive undertaker of faker law-makers
on sacred vapors I'm a shaker of all traitors
Belays raided faded duration sated gated by lesions on nations
Fulmination of generations slated in gray
Painted on a submarine stage".
Keep 'em coming!


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Horseman, it is much appreciated
The Iron Horseman

2 Years Ago

You're welcome, Silente.
wow this is wonderful written . thanks for the poem

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

Thank you, you are welcome
Wow, a real tongue twister, lol. Very descriptive and well-chosen words. A poem mixed in a blender and I mean this as a compliment.

Weirdly good. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

Who does not love blenders... Thanks, Lovecraft
Lovecraft

2 Years Ago

No problem. Just recently came back to the Cafe.
Silente-Write

2 Years Ago

Heh, me as well... I would not really define myself as having returned, however... Just visiting, lo.. read more

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