Plagiarism

Plagiarism

A Poem by Chase Dylan
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Accuse me...?

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I think it's time that I redefined what it means to rhyme with style
in fact my stylus goes on for miles, we call it files that I tend
when bile rises, I defend
It's aisles of hypocrites on one end, and sly deeds done in crypts on the other
Now I sit on spun-bone marrow bleached and harrowing
I don't even need new formats or schemes to defeat these barrel-headed freaks
So give me more time so I can imbibe the two-way grime of doing it bare-backed on the fly
I'm scary with my raps
you lack tact like a Padawan that can't deflect lasers and crap
I'm saddling you, like where's the stirrups and strap
Guess I'll go straight to the neck...
It's jaded-abated-rained down as blood-red sap
gated and fading from life you can't hack
It's sad to call me a liar with my lines
I'll sandblast your face-flat with my freestyle gone wide
It's wild crimes you couldn't commit with a Reebok and beat-box strip
so just sip my fine-a*s till you die a blip with your thumb in lip
 postin' about lies and misguided psychology on the sly like a wimp
I'm a transparent kinda guy, I'll tear your transient a*s down with my fly open
and yes, I'm so honest I'll even admit I used fly twice, context was also sly
Oh wait did I just use sly twice?
Now I'v said twice three times...
 Guess that makes thrice im'a squirt in your eyes for trying to follow along to my nonsense jive
So get lost, bye-bye... And oh yeah...
I said sly four times 

© 2017 Chase Dylan


Author's Note

Chase Dylan
Plagiarism is abhorrent... Go ahead and accuse me... I will freestyle whatever subject, word, or thought given to me... In real-time messenger if you want... I can put my money where my mouth is... So have at it...

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Being here a long time, I went through a lot of crap because I took things too seriously and had to learn to ignore not only people, but accusations, and situations that in the scheme of things were not as important as I made them out to be.

We write here for fun. No one's being graded for graduation and no one is going to receive a salary from what they post. The reviews are not done by professionals and put up against the best in the business, we'd all come in last.

Enjoy writing. If you didn't copy someone else's writing you shouldn't have to spin your head and get dizzy over it. You also don't need to be defensive if you're in the right.

I've seen all the negative talk this morning on the live feed. Relax my friend. There's no need to get upset on a site like this. I wish you good luck.I'm only sharing what I've learned. Take it with a grain of salt or ignore me, I'll be fine either way. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

I think I did... Never reviewed it... As I saw it in very brief passing and then forgot to get back .. read more
barleygirl

6 Years Ago

No worries! No review req'd . . . just wanted to make sure you know you've inspired me.
Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

That is the... STRONGEST FORM OF FLATTERY THAT EXISTS IN WRITING, imo... To be inspired to create..... read more



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respectfully speak your mind,have the world gone stark raven mad? thanks for sharing the nice write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

Yes, the world is quite mad at this point... Hah, thanks, Roxane, appreciate it a lot
To those who feel the need to adversely criticise (as opposed to making constructive suggestions) I wonder why they are not making a fortune selling their own work. Just ignore them - they can massage their own egos.
Question:- Does the style of this effective piece of writing qualify as a rap or a rant ? (i'm still a learner) ......:-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

I agree... If they are truly the gods they claim to be... Then smite me down, be more successful tha.. read more
I'm getting eminem vibes. Get em', Silente!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

What a compliment... Thanks Giullia King...! I am gettin' 'em, hah
I feel bad because I do not review your works that often, but they are truly unique and beautiful.

In my opinion, responding to accusations through some type of art, like poetry or rap in this case, is the most respectable thing to do in this situation. If you were to engage with the accuser one on one, then that would be a problem. But, the fact that your feelings were expressed in this way conveys such maturity and I have high respect for you. Not to mention the words in your poem are very powerful and impacting, even though I am not the person being spoken to.

Wonderful work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

Pffft... Do not feel bad... I can barely review anyone's work, and when I do... It is HARDLY the glo.. read more
Being here a long time, I went through a lot of crap because I took things too seriously and had to learn to ignore not only people, but accusations, and situations that in the scheme of things were not as important as I made them out to be.

We write here for fun. No one's being graded for graduation and no one is going to receive a salary from what they post. The reviews are not done by professionals and put up against the best in the business, we'd all come in last.

Enjoy writing. If you didn't copy someone else's writing you shouldn't have to spin your head and get dizzy over it. You also don't need to be defensive if you're in the right.

I've seen all the negative talk this morning on the live feed. Relax my friend. There's no need to get upset on a site like this. I wish you good luck.I'm only sharing what I've learned. Take it with a grain of salt or ignore me, I'll be fine either way. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

I think I did... Never reviewed it... As I saw it in very brief passing and then forgot to get back .. read more
barleygirl

6 Years Ago

No worries! No review req'd . . . just wanted to make sure you know you've inspired me.
Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

That is the... STRONGEST FORM OF FLATTERY THAT EXISTS IN WRITING, imo... To be inspired to create..... read more

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Added on November 1, 2017
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Chase Dylan
Chase Dylan

Denver, CO



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