Flying? Or Falling?

Flying? Or Falling?

A Poem by [Rampant♍ Rapture]
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I hope you enjoy this little tidbit..from the deep depts of my mind...^^...

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Love is painful

Why do we crave it so?

Does it make us feel wanted?

Make us feel like we can do the impossible?

Is the pain really worth it?

 

All this goes threw my head day in and day out

When you have the love

You feel like you can fly

You feel like your world revolves around them

If they breathed their last breath

You would gladly soon follow after

 

Then comes the pain

And the reality

Of what’s love and just craving

The craving of attention

When your loved one does something

So horrible

 

Is it really worth the pain to love them again?

Is it truly worth feeling like dieing for the feeling of flying?

Then I ask myself a question

What does love ever do for me

Except make me a idiot

Make me do rash things I’ll regret later

I’ll feel like flying

But only for a second

 

Then theirs the other question

After the pain what happens?

Do I feel stronger?

Not really

Does it help me learn from my mistakes?

Not hardly

 

So what is the right thing to do…

 

So I ask you…

 

Would you rather feel like flying for a second only to feel like dieing cause your falling the next?

Or avoid it entirely and enjoy the safety that only the earth and gravity can give you

 

~From The Deep Depts Of Robin's Mind

© 2011 [Rampant♍ Rapture]


Author's Note

[Rampant♍ Rapture]
Plz enjoy..idc if u dont like the grammer or spelling...just comment?...

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In my opinion love isn't worth it. When you find that person you won't have confused muddled feelings and you WILL know that you love them - even if it doesn't show up right away. Don't TRY to love, jsut be happy with being friends with all the people who love you, and then one day you will be IN love with you. They might not be IN love with you at the time, but eventually their feelings could give away to being IN love. And if they never do - you just haven't found the right person yet.

But none of that s**t will make chu feel bettah - so... I love you. I hope that's enough to put at least a RAY of light. A sliver? A molecule? I love you, cuzzeh. I love this poem - it makes da peoplez think, and Lord how people need to think these days! xD Wuffles this poem - but not as much as I love you. We'll show those stupid peoplez. :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


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We always have to opt for flight. How can we not? Love always bosses us. And those who defy it are the less alive for all their erth-bound stability. Yes there is always pain, but so what? Life is pain. Calm contentment is death. Ratinality makes little sense. Fly! Fly!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love is worth it as long as you spend it on the right person.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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In my opinion love isn't worth it. When you find that person you won't have confused muddled feelings and you WILL know that you love them - even if it doesn't show up right away. Don't TRY to love, jsut be happy with being friends with all the people who love you, and then one day you will be IN love with you. They might not be IN love with you at the time, but eventually their feelings could give away to being IN love. And if they never do - you just haven't found the right person yet.

But none of that s**t will make chu feel bettah - so... I love you. I hope that's enough to put at least a RAY of light. A sliver? A molecule? I love you, cuzzeh. I love this poem - it makes da peoplez think, and Lord how people need to think these days! xD Wuffles this poem - but not as much as I love you. We'll show those stupid peoplez. :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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In my mind, Trying no to fall apart., Japan



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