Illuminated

I might work more on this, but this is the first draft. :) I am not sure about ending yet ^^

The depths of liquid solitude,

is the eye that stares me numb.

Seemingly hollow, I drink the deep

and feel my flesh no more;

but the slow pounding of a bleeding heart

and the dull pain of aching bones.

I should move before ...

my feet root carelessly into nothingness;

A mournful, forgotten tree,

where old lovers names are carved with decay.

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[SilverFish]

Work in progress :) the ending is up for some change later ^^