My Broken Song

I can't turn my notes into pieces

In some abstract reasons

I felt my tears fallen

And I can’t explain, why?

 

I torn my soul into pieces

And I cried in a deep sorrow

Like a broken strings

Play for nothing

 

The way how I feel

I never expected!

 

Even I had everything

I can’t replace

My rarest treasure

 

So, please my friend

Let your heart open

And hear my song

Until, you realize

You’re the missing piece

 

I felt sorry in what I did

I want to complete,

My broken song with joy

 

So, please my friend

Don’t let your conscience speak

I’m sorry! Once again. . .

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

This is a friendship poem and my piece talks about me. . Well.. it's only happen last Friday
and I did something, I didn't expected. I let my friends asked themselves "Why"
I illustrate it by music.. so let your ears listen in my broken song.. I also dedicated it to Camilla (my close friend in college) ENJOY!

Reviews

[Thea]

There is such melancholy in this poem that I can feel while reading every single word...Very well-expressed...Good work!

[Helena]

"So, please my friend

Let your heart open

And hear my song

Until, you realize

You’re the missing piece"


A truly lovely poem, almost a lullaby from the heart. Well done!

Helena

[Kuhr Gred]

I like the way. how you review my poem :) Thanks.

[Helena]

You are very welcome my new friend!

Helena :)

[emman]

:) nicely written...worthy to ponder

[SUGATA M]

"Even I had everything
I can’t replace
My rarest treasure"

Fabulous expression. You are a dream poet who can speak in the language of heart, tear and blood.

[Kuhr Gred]

I like this comment.. thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the desire of forgiveness in the poem. Mistakes are made. No-one want to lose a good friend. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[afra]

so sad but great poem

[Pax]

its so smooth like the song..what am i talking its indeed a song..lol
its really good, well done kuhr.
with melody it will be amazing..

[Steven Cash]

This is a great poem. A tad sad :(

[Kuhr Gred]

yeah.. I'm cried.. while I composed that piece :) thanks.. :)

[Steven Cash]

no prob

[John Alexander McFadyen]

An interesting piece with a guilt ridden flavour but light in places in its pleading.

[Kuhr Gred]

thank you... :) i well appreciated your review :D..