Intimate Friend

Intimate Friend

A Poem by Kuhr Gred

A souvenir of the past
Holding on One's desire
The truth seekers of life
Through thousand miles

I call to my mind
All joyous reminiscence
Flows from my spirit

You will be my inspiration 
Even you're not by side
I'm ready to give my hand

In any game we move
Running to finish line
And I'll wait the day
Till we meet again!

© 2012 Kuhr Gred


Author's Note

Kuhr Gred
Thanks for review! I hope you like this.. I made this for my beloved friend because you're one of my inspiration ;)

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I liked the writing, but the formatting kind of threw me for a loop. (Not sure if I just used that correctly..Oh well.) Anyway, that's just me. I tend to have issues reading really large font. It overloads my brain or something.

Good job anyway! The message is so sweet and inspirational, which is very refreshing amid all the depressing poems out there.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Entrancing sentimental piece of writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a nice emotional poem. Yes, people do build meaningful friendships along the way (:

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Good write, though the font size really threw me off, the message in your poem is very nice and the poem itself is well written...good write!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good work. I didnt like the structure of the verse, it made it unattractive when recited aloud. The message and theme of the poem was very attractive though.

Posted 8 Years Ago


i like the message of the poem, but the font is wee bit off.. :D but oh well its great.. , great work, mate.

-Conie (from Tanauan, Batangas Philippines)

neng galing mong magsulat :P xoxo


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Large font was a bit of a turn off however the content itself was very well written. Very kind hearted and heartfelt great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved the phrase "you will be my inspiration, even you're not by 'my' side"
Nice little piece and as it is for a real person all the more poignant!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Lovely poem of upbeat emotion :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I liked the writing, but the formatting kind of threw me for a loop. (Not sure if I just used that correctly..Oh well.) Anyway, that's just me. I tend to have issues reading really large font. It overloads my brain or something.

Good job anyway! The message is so sweet and inspirational, which is very refreshing amid all the depressing poems out there.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kuhr Gred
Kuhr Gred

Bulacan, Philippines



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