Tiny Voices

silent voices that we neither listen to or hear about.

In a small and crowded room called Earth

Where people compressed together

Like sardines in a can, all they share

And seems lucky enough to have one another

 

But there are things, they do not see

People want to perform different roles, it seems

thinking this is all there is

Ignoring the cries of those tiny human beings

 

Small cries made by tiny voices

Crying out not to let them pass the chance

To live in a congested place like Earth

To enjoy the lovely creations that life can offer

 

Would you care to give them

Their only hope to experience life

To inhale the sweetness of these blessings

To feel the pain and joy of living

 

Reviews

[Wicahpi]

"(And seems) lucky enough to have one another" ~ (And seem or Seemingly)

"(Thinking these are all there is to be)" ~ the whole sentence threw me off. how bout something
like this: '(thinking this is all there is)"...'ignoring the cries of tiny human beings'


other then those few things, everything else seems just fine :)