one of my earliest poetries along with The Lost Soul (1st scene)
Red.Hot.Feverish.Boiling hot inside me.My eyes are getting wet.I want to explode!I want to curse!I want to shout and kick some butts!But how could I?How could I....... stay angry with someone you love?... stay angry with the person who loves you more than anyone else?... stay angry with your mom even she messes up your schedule?What could I do?All I could do is...... cry.
Curious does the word structure of the poem has something to do with the poem. I am at the moment tired so i cannot really think to much. haha. If not it would be good if you did something like so would create more of an impact.
This poem is beautifully written and expressed, the idea of love being the catalyst
conversion, the form is fitting and flow functions with design, great job.
"I want to explode!
I want to curse!
I want to shout and kick some butts!
But how could I?
How could I...
.... stay angry with someone you love?"
Such truthful and full of heated steam here, Awesome! words, all of us have felt this way from time to time. We let our emotions get the better of us and we want the person who hurts us feel it too, when they don't OOO! we get so bad. Awesome Writing....Kim
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