Spring Blossom

The poem before I wrote Autumn

the sky is blue

the clouds are smiling down at me

i can see greens around me

no more cold winds.. no more cold nights...

 

the trees are looming over me

smiling and waving their branches

happy to see their friends

excited to see colors...  delighted to see beauty once again...

 

somebody is walking towards me

she is smiling down at me

a heartfelt smile... a sincere one...

i felt a warm glow inside me when she says...

... look how lovely this flower is!

... look how she waves her small leaves at me!

... look how her yellow petals dance in the wind!

and she plays with me all day...

... all day ... all season...

Reviews

[Leah]

I could actually read this both ways. One way, it made me feel as if I were floating on a cloud. The other way, is a little more, corrosive. Either way, good work!

[Ravenskald]

Just *smile*

well done

~R

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Very well done. I can just see spring bursting forth in color in this amazing piece.


I had never thought to write a poem from the flower's point of view.


somebody is walking towards me

she is smiling down at me

a heartfelt smile... a sincere one...

i felt a warm glow inside me when she says...

... look how lovely this flower is!

... look how she waves her small leaves at me!

... look how her yellow petals dance in the wind!

and she plays with me all day...

... all day ... all season...



Yes this is a poem that should be written in a book and enjoyed for years to come.

[darkgurl]

"... look how lovely this flower is!
... look how she waves her small leaves at me!
... look how her yellow petals dance in the wind!
and she plays with me all day...
... all day ... all season..."

Once again a beautiful write with beautiful stanza's especailly the above one. This is a beautiful write and quite touching as well...Kim