Winter-Tide Moment

Looking out at the frosty winter scene outside my window...

It looks still and calm outside,

Like a snow globe;

Perfect, fluffy flakes

Lazily drifting to the blanketed earth.

A picturesque winter-white world

Rests just outside my window,

Beckoning me;

Begging to be enjoyed with quiet spirit.

Baroque music plays in the background;

Adagio in C Major, Rv 109

by Antonio Vivaldi,

Seeming perfect for the winter-tide scene.

Snow falling in the front of my home about one month ago.

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

I like summer Winter Fall and Spring But winter brings back warm and fuzzing things like holidays Christmas and New Years parties and celebrations everywhere. Bring close friends near this is why I like winter dear for me to hold you near and tell you how much I love you and miss you all throughout the year. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year My Dear.

[jonah]

really comforting and relaxing. You succeeded in creating a strong imagery. the poem and the picture work together to build a world of whiteness and snow, in an amusing, friendly way. No need to be afraid of the cold here, it's all kind and still. an interesting piece.

[Elina]

Thank you for the lovely review.

[jonah]

you're welcome. thank you for the lovely poem too.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Amazing write. I loved it. :-) :-D your very talented.

Kaze~

[Elina]

Thank you very much.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[StrixNebulosa]

Its as if you were painting with your words here... this piece is lovely.

[Elina]

Thank you for the lovely review! I am glad you enjoyed it.

[Sami Khalil]

"A picturesque winter-white world
Rests just outside my window,
Beckoning me;
Begging to be enjoyed with quiet spirit.

Baroque music plays in the background;"

[Asem]

so nice when i read it i was feel i watch beauty pic
thank you
i will keep read more

[Elina]

Thank you for the lovely review.

[Devesh]

Loved this! It felt calming.

[Elina]

Thank you, Devesh.

[Devesh]

You're welcome.

[Shaquana Adams]

You drew a beautiful picture with your words. Very nicely penned :)

[Elina]

Thank you.

[Thomas Skahill]

Really well constructed atmosphere, I almost want the poem to continue and complete the details of what this winter tide moment is further consisted of. My favorite line is probably the "perfect, fluffy fakes" as it's comforting, exciting, and is somehow making me hungry :/. I would suggest you more cohesively integrate the music in the background as it almost seems like a name drop for cultural acumen.

[Elina]

Thank you for the review...and the advice.

[Johanna]

Oh I loved this poem!! loved the picture as well.. added to the magic.. "It looks still and calm outside,
Like a snow globe, Perfect, fluffy flakes, Lazily drifting to the blanketed earth" loved this part especally! your so talented Elina!
keep up the good work

[Elina]

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.