Let go

Let go

A Poem by Angel of the devil

He wants
to be with
her
But he 
can't let go 
of the 
past
He wants to 
be the one
to hold 
her 
While she is 
happy
While she is 
depressed
While she is 
crying
He wants to 
hold her through
everything
But to do 
that
He has to 
let go
He must let
go of the 
past
To be with 
her
He must 
move on with 
his future 
with her
And she will wait
to be with 
him
To truly 
be with her 
She will wait
for him to give 
his heart
his whole 
heart
to her
As she has given 
her heart 
to him

© 2016 Angel of the devil


Author's Note

Angel of the devil
i just wrote this last night

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the poem did good at communicating being torn. torn between two. letting go is the easy part, its the reality that things are never the same. Someone here is trying while feeling sidestepped and non-exclusive. Love starts to not feel sacred, then what. Just my take,its just what the poem surfaced for me. is a really strong write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

7 Years Ago

thank you very much for your review!



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I like it it's deep and sweet

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

7 Years Ago

thank you!
This is very clever. You've captured the give & take of loving someone very nicely. Good job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

7 Years Ago

thank you very much
sadly there are so many things that hold us back, be it tangible or barricades we hide behind. if only it were so easy..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

7 Years Ago

very true.....
This is great.
I love the formatting.
I think how we structure the lines adds another layer of depth to a poem.
Nice job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

7 Years Ago

thank you very much!
Wow this is very deep and speaks loudly to me. I understand both side of the poem. He wishs to try to make her whole and he wishes to take her pain but he thinks the past is what brought them together in the first place so he does not wish to leave it or he can't let go with out her help. She wants the same as him she wants to be with him now and not then. She want him to be present with here not lurking in the past. I love this one so very much. Great job. Keep up the great work. Yours truely a mad lord

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel of the devil

7 Years Ago

*smiles back*
Lord of mad men

7 Years Ago

*smiles more*
Angel of the devil

7 Years Ago

*hugs you *

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Angel of the devil
Angel of the devil

East Anglia , United Kingdom



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