scream

The need to scream out into the world
letting out all your hate
releasing all your pain
screaming out everything you have kept inside
finally bursting out
wanting, needing to release all your emotions
yelling until you loose your voice
until you can no longer breathe
needing the world to know
even if they don't listen
just needing to finally scream

Author's Note

honest opinion please :) i could really use the advice thanks :)

Reviews

[Tomislav Petricevic]

I can relate to this poem even more than "no future". I usually keep emotions inside for as long as I can, but the time eventually comes when I must explode...but people usually listen when they see you yelling and being serious, so it is good to throw it out.
I like this poem a lot, it's really amazing. I don't know what advice to give you. For example, I personally like poems that rhyme, but that is a subjective matter since we all have our style. So I respect yours, and I say you just keep writing while being true to yourself! :D

[Beautiful_Nightmere]

Yuhh know i love yuhh but i think this poem could use some more.........descriptive words! I'm not sure that that is what i'm trying to sayy but this is:
Haha! I think that yuhh should use the Thesaurus! I would like to see some more "big words" as i call it!(: But good job! Love yuhh!(:

[xSamilynnx]

so good!!!!!!!!!simmi your writing is absoulty amazing xD xD i wuffles you@!!!!!!!!